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Daybreak
by Kate Burnside
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"Hey, Kate... this has been done!"... yeah, but I cross my heart I wrote it, word for word, yesterday! Weird, huh?! Must be all the red meat we're eating! LOL Kate xx




DAYBREAK


My fluid flesh is woken
from a heavy drowse;
It's still dark, but a songbird
heralds the new day.

Our bed is an ocean where,
in these drifting moments,
I float like a downy, curled feather
carried by waves.

Skin gathers and tightens
as love's breath seeks me out.
Passion's silent rhapsody tunes me
taut as the string of a bow.

Within your encircling arms
I am so slight
I could be nothing more than imagination;
Yet it's my pulsating energy that fuels us.

Mute rhythms turn to thunder rolls
as the symphony drags me under;
Surfing the seabed
I am drenched in quicksilver.

I journey towards the centre of the earth's core
whilst exploring subterranean caverns
and searching the Halls of the Mountain King;
Then I swallow the orchestra whole...

* * * *

In this moment I am reborn,
fresh and as new
as the shimmering daybreak -
glad that you are an early riser...

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Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 12/28/2004
Potent imagery here, Kate. Well done indeed!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 12/27/2004
I love the hook of the last line on this, Kate. Beautiful romance spun into a universe of expanded thoughts and emotions. Truly evolved passions flavor these delightful, image packed verses.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by jude forese 12/27/2004
what a passionate song of enlightened romance from within the orchestra within you ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/27/2004
Exceptional! To be compared to the shimmering daybreak ...WOW! That is really a fantastic image! Splendid poem Kate!
Reviewed by A PAX 12/27/2004
Oh my!
how romantic and loving
beautiful images.......very clear actually!
you have a gift
:)A
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/27/2004
(((kate)))

*smiles* a most tender and passionate write--enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/27/2004
Gotta get rid of that waterbed! Seriously, your images of love and lovemaking are fresh and unique.

Ron
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 12/27/2004
Sounds like you both are and what a Christmas present.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/27/2004
Yes Kate, it may have been done before but never in such a way as you do it. I can almost feel the afterglow of morning passion in your heart. Very well done and very enjoyable read. Thank you for lifting the blinds a little.

Felix
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/27/2004
Imagery, passion, love at daybreak, this poem has it all. Well done
Reviewed by Lori Moore 12/27/2004
Excellent images, Kate.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/27/2004
Reborn, fresh and new, in the morn.

A most captivating write, Kate.

PS "Karnivore Kate," Andy Says. HMM!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/27/2004
Karnivore Kate. Morning glory huh? Hark the Heralds, sounds like morning fun fun fun...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/27/2004
Beautiful imagery, lovely and intense poem, Kate.

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