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Haiku & Senryu - A Set of Seven
by Lori L Moore
Tuesday, December 28, 2004
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Haiku is simply what is happening in this place at this moment. - Basho

winter sunset-
whimsical colors
splashed on blue

december rain-
tears fall
on christmas day

without warning-
moments of sorrow
moments of joy

playful games
roller coasters

the perfect picture
without a flash

random snowflakes-
autumn leaves
kiss the ground

fallen snow-
fresh sheets
on a cozy bed

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Reviewed by Founding Editor 1/29/2009


lovely haiku, seriously
Reviewed by Dale Hudgins 1/2/2005
Nice write Lori. I liked this one
Dale Hudgins
Reviewed by A. Gagné (Reader) 12/31/2004
Where would Man be without the beautiful mystique of Woman's changing mood and irrepressible tears... probably still in a cave, grunting. Necessity is the mother of invention.

Something in the way she smiles...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 12/30/2004
These were very lovely haikus, beautiful thoughts Lori,

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 12/30/2004
No matter how many you post, I'm always drawn into each set with ease. Excellant Lori
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader) 12/29/2004
wonderful depiction.. I can almost see some of the scenes you describe.. :) so pretty.
thanks for sharing, happy holidays,
~Kari Anne~
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/29/2004
Yup, you've just about summed up the inner and outer landscapes in your inimitable succinct and masterful fashion! Each word worthy of its place and should be captured before, like snowflakes, it melts flimsy or whimsy here! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/29/2004
Wonderful poetry Lori!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 12/29/2004
Lori--you do these so well and make it look so effortless. I envy your talent. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/29/2004
random snowflakes-
autumn leaves
kiss the ground

I've seen the Pope do that too.

Thanks for your weather update Lori..

Done in your delightful way...
Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader) 12/29/2004
These are really lovely Lori....I especially like the first one!

Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/28/2004
A lovely collections you present here
enjoyed much

William .....Peace
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 12/28/2004
Ahhhh.........perfect ending to the day. Lori, you always know how to put a cherry on top.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 12/28/2004
Each one has a life of its own, Lori. All beautiful and gentle. You are the Ku-Pro-U-No?
Take care,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/28/2004
Wonderful creations all, Lori. Blessings of love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/28/2004
Every one a beauty....
Reviewed by jude forese 12/28/2004
all very nice ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/28/2004
What a wonderful way of saying you love snow too. Seriously wonderful write Lori. Great piece.

Reviewed by robin buehler 12/28/2004
esp. like the second one makes me think why there were tears on christmas. a ring perhaps?
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/28/2004
You mean there is such a thing as fresh sheets...? Guess I will have to go out and buy me a set...good to see you still knocking out these great Haiku...Peace and Happy New Year, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/28/2004
You are most wonderful doing these..
Have a great 05!
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/28/2004
Simple and sweet, captures the moment well
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 12/28/2004
Without a Warning
Only Moments Of Sorrow
Gone Forever
Moments Of Joy...

Reviewed by Sue Hess 12/28/2004
nicely done
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/28/2004
Ahh, yes. Winter in California. You bring back memories, Lori.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch 12/28/2004
~You my friend are such a talent`
~I enjoyed them all~`*
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/28/2004
All wonderful , I've missed you! Superb Ku!;-)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/28/2004

all are exquisite, my favorite is

the perfect picture
without a flash" *grins* this one so lovely

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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