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Artist's Model
by Kate Burnside

Wednesday, December 29, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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She was naked
invisible -

until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

In his portrait
was the image she
had never seen
of a person not recognised:

made visible

with just his one word:


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Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) 6/30/2010
And, as I read of the depictions of this one, inscribed by another great artist, Kate Burnside, this is beautiful, too. I love the elemental feel of this--a feel of a personal and un-interrupted moment transpiring with your words. Thank you, Kate....
Reviewed by A PAX 1/28/2005
this is so so loving.........its a journey!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 1/9/2005
Sitern angel...10/10....written with depth and n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/3/2005
WOW!!! this is exquisite. Must catch up on the others.
Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) 1/1/2005
And that word also describes this poem. The lyrical and brightly lit atmosphere created by this is obvious. I am envious of her. Well done, again!
Reviewed by George Jackson 12/30/2004
That is exceptional poetry.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 12/30/2004
yes exquisite!!!
how we all would love to be
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 12/30/2004
This was exquisite Kate, absolutely beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 12/30/2004
Ohhhhhhh, Kate....this is positively scrumptious!
As a former painter (I'm now hung up on cameras & digital art)...
I can fairly smell the turpentine in this lovely "wash" of
emotions. One of your best.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/30/2004
until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

A lover's paint brush truly is a magic wand.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/30/2004
Kate this is one of your very best, wonderful the portrait love can paint.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/30/2004
My portrait is in the loft, going all horrible and ugly as time moves on..

The person of who you write sounds like they are seeing they were never the ugly duckling, only thought it, when everyone else saw the swan..
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 12/30/2004
You painted an image so clear. TY for sharing
Reviewed by jude forese 12/29/2004
a perfect portrait!

until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

i luv this verse ...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 12/29/2004
This does not apply to me for all the scars that I have from surgery bit I do wish I could have posed nude of course in my younger years.
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/29/2004
Pictures painted by an artist's brush, brings out the best in us as does this wonderful poem you have painted, leaving me agast at your wonderful talent.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/29/2004
I can't express myself on this one except to say well done.

Reviewed by Lori Moore 12/29/2004
This is beautiful.

"until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes..."

I love those lines!
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 12/29/2004
Bravo, Kate! This is magical and wonderfully inspiring!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/29/2004

"...she was naked
until he brushed her heart
chalked her soul
etched her mind
drew her potential
erased her blemishes...."

GAD girl i love the way you write. exciting! breathtaking! your words are works of art--masterpieces! BRAVA! thank you for enriching my life with this one...a priceless piece!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/29/2004
Kate this is utterly splendid! you surpass beauty with this one!
May 2005 be your best ever! Love, Eileen

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