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Artist's Model
by Kate Burnside
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She was naked
invisible -

until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

In his portrait
was the image she
had never seen
of a person not recognised:

made visible

with just his one word:


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Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
And, as I read of the depictions of this one, inscribed by another great artist, Kate Burnside, this is beautiful, too. I love the elemental feel of this--a feel of a personal and un-interrupted moment transpiring with your words. Thank you, Kate....
Reviewed by A PAX
this is so so loving.........its a journey!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Sitern angel...10/10....written with depth and n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Paul Berube
WOW!!! this is exquisite. Must catch up on the others.
Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
And that word also describes this poem. The lyrical and brightly lit atmosphere created by this is obvious. I am envious of her. Well done, again!
Reviewed by George Jackson
That is exceptional poetry.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
yes exquisite!!!
how we all would love to be
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was exquisite Kate, absolutely beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Ohhhhhhh, Kate....this is positively scrumptious!
As a former painter (I'm now hung up on cameras & digital art)...
I can fairly smell the turpentine in this lovely "wash" of
emotions. One of your best.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

A lover's paint brush truly is a magic wand.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Kate this is one of your very best, wonderful the portrait love can paint.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
My portrait is in the loft, going all horrible and ugly as time moves on..

The person of who you write sounds like they are seeing they were never the ugly duckling, only thought it, when everyone else saw the swan..
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
You painted an image so clear. TY for sharing
Reviewed by jude forese
a perfect portrait!

until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes...

i luv this verse ...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
This does not apply to me for all the scars that I have from surgery bit I do wish I could have posed nude of course in my younger years.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Pictures painted by an artist's brush, brings out the best in us as does this wonderful poem you have painted, leaving me agast at your wonderful talent.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I can't express myself on this one except to say well done.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
This is beautiful.

"until he brushed her heart;
chalked her soul;
etched her mind;
drew her potential;
erased her blemishes..."

I love those lines!
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Bravo, Kate! This is magical and wonderfully inspiring!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

"...she was naked
until he brushed her heart
chalked her soul
etched her mind
drew her potential
erased her blemishes...."

GAD girl i love the way you write. exciting! breathtaking! your words are works of art--masterpieces! BRAVA! thank you for enriching my life with this one...a priceless piece!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Kate this is utterly splendid! you surpass beauty with this one!
May 2005 be your best ever! Love, Eileen
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