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Gray Love
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Sunday, January 02, 2005
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Gray day,
Haven for soul's blues,
Your skies
Umbrella my mood.

Gray day
Turns my flesh into food,
Dark eyes
Smolder with my truth.

Gray day,
Heaven-sent my way,
Uncovers guise
Of depthless skies.

Gray day,
I love you.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Copyright 1/2/04

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Reviewed by Ryan Kelly (Reader) 1/4/2005
Okay Erin, I'm very tempted to change my point of view of those dreary days.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 1/3/2005
We all need someone or something which can and will support our moods, even if it is gray, cloudy skies. You are not alone.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 1/3/2005
I love this, Erin. There's certainly a time and place when we can embrace our "grey" instead of desiring to "shoo" it away. I like this interpretation of being comfortable, relaxed and at peace with the inevitable "greys" we all encounter. Speaks of a personality that is at ease and in harmony with itself. Succinct, well-metred with a wonderful rhyming scheme and great images... gets a gold star from me! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by jude forese 1/2/2005
ah, the gray magic that surrounds us ...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/2/2005
Good one, Erin! Sometimes we do prefer a gray day to a sunny day. The quietness of a gray days seems to give us more time to think our thoughts.

Happy New Year to you and your family!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 1/2/2005
yes, very cute and touching, enjoyed reading this Erin, hope your new year shines. l&p G
Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) 1/2/2005
A "cute" little dity Erin.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 1/2/2005
This "Gray Love" sounds like a rainbow to my ears and seems rose to my eyes. Its symbolism is a viand for the soul, and its impressionism
prods the wings of imagination.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Gray Love".

Thank You for posting Your Flowers to be shared.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/2/2005
Some great lines in this one, and I too love gray days! The sun is ever present in our climes,Erin. My area of Ca is now getting deluged with rain and most of us love the change, we look forward to it, in this season.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/2/2005
Between white and black is gray and it seems to be the best way...ED
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/2/2005
Moodswings of the!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 1/2/2005
"your skies umbrella my mood"... ooooooo, sweets, you're such a metaphoric mistress.. sigh. I saw myself in this one. We do have a bond, Erin. Sometimes you speak my mind. (smile) katy xox.
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