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Marriage - Commitments
by Tinka Boukes

Sunday, January 02, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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MARRIAGE – COMMITMENTS”

***!***!***!***!***!***!***!***

 

Mirrored in your eyes
A
ll I knew was you
R
est of my life became a roller coaster ride
R
ambling to downhill fame
I
mpossible to remain sane
A
wrestling and pestering drunken pest
G
ive your love to others, but I without it
E
ndless stress and worries my daily bread
!~!

Cause I loved you so…at first
O
ur minds have been forgotten
M
y heart was warmed by your love
M
y mind became confused
I
couldn't tell you where I've been
T
hrill me and amaze me you did
M
y heart is not as cold as you can see
E
ach day now that’s passing by with you
N
ot there any more with me
T
hat’s where we are today
Shot to pieces by hurt..


 

***!***!***!***!***

Copyright ©2002 ~ 2004 Tinka Boukes
 

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Reviewed by Paul Williams 1/14/2005
A powerful and sad poem...excellent write, I know the feelings expressed all too well.

Paul:-}
Reviewed by Dave Harm 1/11/2005
If you know you did everything humanly possible - then there is nothing else to do. God Bless, Dave
Reviewed by A PAX 1/8/2005
ohhhhhhh
poor baby
now I understand
be true to your heart T!
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 1/7/2005
yes ma'am...you captured it all, right here. there's not much more to say about that sacred institution, now is there...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/3/2005
A powerful write Tinka, very heart touching. I agree with Jude, nightmares are not to be indulged in.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/2/2005
I have to agree with Robert, when one dream ends.....
it is time to have a new dream...
Reviewed by jude forese 1/2/2005
sometimes we have to accept the dream is over ...

sad poem, Tiinka ...
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 1/2/2005
Painful and poignant, Tink. Eileen has the right word for you, VIBRANT
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 1/2/2005
people shouldn't marry oo young. even when old and mature it's a struggle to survive positively each and every day. some piece work tink. l&p G
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/2/2005
Excellent and very painful acrostic Tinka, so very sad,

Reindeer
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/2/2005
So sad a write.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 1/2/2005
Tinka,

Fabuolus art and a divine acrostic - superbly crafted and written ... exceptional!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/2/2005
As always a wonderful acrostic from you...Ed
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/2/2005
My heart is not as cold as you can see

May it always continue to be warm, Tinka.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/2/2005
Wow! Id say it's time to make new plans Tinka! You are a strong vibrant lady and I know you'll overcome this! All the best to you!
Love, Eileen
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/2/2005
Some painful truths in these verses, Tinka. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/2/2005
You see it is the failure to commit that breaks the hearts. A well done poem written to an old song from one that knew it well.



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