|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A powerful and sad poem...excellent write, I know the feelings expressed all too well.
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|If you know you did everything humanly possible - then there is nothing else to do. God Bless, Dave|
|Reviewed by A PAX
now I understand
be true to your heart T!
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|yes ma'am...you captured it all, right here. there's not much more to say about that sacred institution, now is there...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A powerful write Tinka, very heart touching. I agree with Jude, nightmares are not to be indulged in.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|I have to agree with Robert, when one dream ends.....
it is time to have a new dream...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes we have to accept the dream is over ...
sad poem, Tiinka ...
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Painful and poignant, Tink. Eileen has the right word for you, VIBRANT|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|people shouldn't marry oo young. even when old and mature it's a struggle to survive positively each and every day. some piece work tink. l&p G|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent and very painful acrostic Tinka, so very sad,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|So sad a write.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Fabuolus art and a divine acrostic - superbly crafted and written ... exceptional!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|As always a wonderful acrostic from you...Ed|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|My heart is not as cold as you can see
May it always continue to be warm, Tinka.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! Id say it's time to make new plans Tinka! You are a strong vibrant lady and I know you'll overcome this! All the best to you!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Some painful truths in these verses, Tinka. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|You see it is the failure to commit that breaks the hearts. A well done poem written to an old song from one that knew it well.|