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Whole & Hole
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Sunday, January 02, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Percentage as a person, place of residence.

Both my (w)holes changed over the years,
at times they both cause me pain and tears.
As a person I've fought to be whole,
then I fought to keep a living hole.
At age 54 I'm finally done,
my bad and my good side one.

Many years I couldn't face me all,
then one day bad came to call.
I quit running from the fool,
then learned to use him as a tool.
Bad knows who's boss,
he helps maintain to prevent a total loss.

The hole I live in is my home,
I work hard to maintain my dome.
All of us know the deal,
we got to fight the devils appeal.
He'll bring down the (w)hole house,
because he's an evil louse.

All for one,
one for all.


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Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 1/3/2005
Dear G,

Sage words indeed ! Yes, we do have to fight the devils appeal, sometimes it does look like the easier route, but it's NOT.

warm hugs
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/3/2005
Holy Hole the whole poem is jolly good!!

Love Tinka :)
Reviewed by jude forese 1/2/2005
yep, guard your hole ..
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/2/2005
When I see "hole" I think of the one Saddam Hussein was captured in.
Imagine a billinaire self-made king/tyrant of a country, being reduced to hiding in a hole in the ground. That's why Grady you make sense, leave the devil to fill up his own w/holes;-)Another sage one by the G-man!;-)
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 1/2/2005
:) You never fail to help ground your readers in your optimism and 'wholly' wonderful outlook on life, Grady.

Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/2/2005
Interesting contrast between the two words and how they also compliment one another. We are all responsible for our whole as well as the hole in which we dwell. Sometimes reassessment is in order for both. Nice work!
Take care,
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/2/2005
The thing is my house did burn down around us and blew my husband out but then we got a better one. What did he succeed at? Liked the write though and I am 56. No matter how old you are it is hard to get past this sort of thing.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 1/2/2005
Hope N Pray You Don't Find Yourself Sleeping In Your W(hole) Car In Streets As I Did!

You Bet Devil's Alive An Well Dragging You to His (Your) Holes In Holy Hell! This Is Aspiring Write For Those Who Can Read Between Lines_

Most Of You Even When W(Hole) Opens- Hits (You)Them In There Face Won't Even Know It Until There (Your) Ass' Burning...

Thanks For Your Comments!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/2/2005
interesting write, g! happy new year; may 2005 be your best year EVER!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/2/2005
Very Intriging write!
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