|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|i like this one a lot. more for what it doesn't say than for what it says. peace, poet...|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Ooooooh. Yeah, the rage is in this one.|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Take a sword and strike the snake: rebuke it and free yourself from it bloody oppression.
One who Knows
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|A very powerful write, Tinka. I'm going to agree with Ed...when you're ready to let go of the pain, you will feel so much better :) Trust me, I've been there recently|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|working past the pain can be agony, Tinka. well done.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Stunning ending, Tinka! I must profess to wanting to smack that snake, quickly, before he does more damage with its venom and crazed yellow eyes...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|isn't it strange how we can build a resistance to venom ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Let it go Tinka...You WILL see and feel a difference...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|a really sad write...sorry for your pain|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Ouch, sad write Tinks.
Ps can't believe the cricket score(:::
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wow what a pic and poem.|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|This is a pain-filled poem. Very graphic! ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Very good. Snakes do have a way of getting around.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
excellence! remind me not to make you mad :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Boy and that movie about Cobra is coming on the SCI FI channel soon.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A profoundly, extremely well-crafted poem - superb all the way!!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Your words are much too powerful
to be venemous Tinka!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I hope one day the venom wil be gone Tinka,replaced
by the love and light you desire...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|yikes! remind me never to make you angry, tinka dear! LOL
powerful, emotive write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(