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Venom
by Tinka Boukes
Monday, January 03, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Venom

The word are burning on my tongue
There I see you smile again
For my agony and pain
You have everything to gain
I am not playing any game
My love for you will stay the same
Strike me… fight me… take me…
I am yours to take… snake
For words are meaningless to you
And for those… who no longer cares
Poison me with your venom
I am willing to die for you
I don’t want to get laid
I am too loaded… with enough poison
Ready to explode… or to kill a Rat!!
There I see you smiling once again
Behind my smile hides a tear
So unbearable and sincere
And behind it all
You will find
Silence


Copyright ©2002 ~ 2004 Tinka Boukes
 

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 1/7/2005
i like this one a lot. more for what it doesn't say than for what it says. peace, poet...
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 1/4/2005
Ooooooh. Yeah, the rage is in this one.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 1/4/2005
Take a sword and strike the snake: rebuke it and free yourself from it bloody oppression.

One who Knows
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Danielle Mundy 1/3/2005
A very powerful write, Tinka. I'm going to agree with Ed...when you're ready to let go of the pain, you will feel so much better :) Trust me, I've been there recently
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 1/3/2005
working past the pain can be agony, Tinka. well done.
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 1/3/2005
Stunning ending, Tinka! I must profess to wanting to smack that snake, quickly, before he does more damage with its venom and crazed yellow eyes...
Reviewed by jude forese 1/3/2005
isn't it strange how we can build a resistance to venom ...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/3/2005
Let it go Tinka...You WILL see and feel a difference...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/3/2005
a really sad write...sorry for your pain
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/3/2005
Ouch, sad write Tinks.

Ps can't believe the cricket score(:::
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/3/2005
Wow what a pic and poem.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 1/3/2005
This is a pain-filled poem. Very graphic! ~ Sara
Reviewed by Lori Moore 1/3/2005
Very good. Snakes do have a way of getting around.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/3/2005
(((tinka)))

excellence! remind me not to make you mad :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/3/2005
Boy and that movie about Cobra is coming on the SCI FI channel soon.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 1/3/2005
Tinka,

A profoundly, extremely well-crafted poem - superb all the way!!


Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Dale Clark 1/3/2005
Your words are much too powerful
to be venemous Tinka!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/3/2005
I hope one day the venom wil be gone Tinka,replaced
by the love and light you desire...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/3/2005
yikes! remind me never to make you angry, tinka dear! LOL

powerful, emotive write; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(



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