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|Reviewed by A PAX
|actually this could apply to any gender(ok a few are absolutely male reactions lol) preference
I like it
good rhyme and romance :)
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|Beautiful, romantic and passionate poem that is so wonderfully written!|
|Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
|Sultry and deliberate!|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|very good...i enjoyed this alot|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|This is beautifully wrought, Ryan Kelly. :) Your entwining of romantic age with a few whimsical images, like
"My face aglow with blush
I feel a curtsy, but instead rise and bow"
created an aura of sensual carnality that can be felt with stirrings and tinglings by a sentient reader.
This section is lovely, and relatable to my experiences, of late.
"His eyes so dark of brown
Holding all his mysteries"
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
who is not your aunt... :)
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Who says that romantic poetry has gone out of style it is very much in style.|