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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
1/19/2009 |
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| Different, but highly accountable to read and absorb. |
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| Reviewed by kindra garber (Reader) |
1/14/2005 |
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i like it alot a little confusing when you repeat but it is your style of writing
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
1/7/2005 |
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very creative, with an unusaul flow
enjyed the new-ness here!!!! |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
1/6/2005 |
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Erin,
Brillant style, verse and line - exceptional poem ... loved this one!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/6/2005 |
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Excellent piece Erin!!
Hey I am still waiting for those promised cookies!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
1/6/2005 |
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| Because of humanities inability to remain focused and committed towards each other, one can often relate to the terrible pitfalls that mankind continues to fall into. They say patience is a virtue, yet without everyone sharing a common goal, far too many shall die in vain. Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/5/2005 |
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| Okay, pardon my stupidity everybody, but I have no idea what a pantoum is and my wordweb program does not even have in its dictionary, which is unusual, but I like the poem either way...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Eva Black (Reader) |
1/5/2005 |
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You are the third Poet to present a Pantoum here in AuthorsDen in the last two years; and this, "As Everybody Dies" is a Pantoum that supplies and complies with all that poetic literature is about!
Eva Black, BFA |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader) |
1/5/2005 |
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The first that I read from Your pen. "As Everybody Dies" is a striking Pantoum - composed in free rhymed verse - duly delivered in full compliance with Poetry's mission.
Thank You for enriching the pages of Poetry.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by David Livingstone |
1/5/2005 |
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This is the best Pantoum I read this year.
"As Everybody Dies" will make the point, and will show the difference.
This is a Pantoum that can give any poet the Master's title.
"As Everybody Dies" makes this Pantoum alive.
David Livingstone. |
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| Reviewed by Margarita Caligaris (Reader) |
1/5/2005 |
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Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen, - you have written one of kind - Pantoum of the twenty-first century. This Pantoum is self-explanatory, and has given us its most and the best lines.
Thank you, Author-Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen.
Your Pantoum does make history!
Margarita Caligaris, litt.D., Ph.D. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
1/5/2005 |
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Sometimes, words are used in a context other than the most common, or a reader's mind-inferred, where it's a matter of perspective and relativity, one reason I am a synonym addict.
As a noun, animal is defined as 1. a living organism which feeds on organic matter, usu. one with specialized sense organs and a nervous system, and able to respond quickly to stimuli 3. a brutish or uncivilized person
To refine my meaning, I used the word 'human' in front of animal to lead the reader to see humanity is worse than animalkind, though they are defined the same. Ed is such a sweetheart, holding love in his large heart for all animals in the animalkingdom, and defends them with conviction and vigor.
Erin
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/5/2005 |
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| I sometimes think we do an injustice to animals when we refer to ourselves as such; although we really are animals, nonhuman animals often seem so much wiser than we seem to be, especially in today's sorry world. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/5/2005 |
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| Used to know what the name of this style of poetry was but I am having a "Senior Moment." Beautiful. Thought-provoking. Outstanding. Take a bow. Clap, clap. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/5/2005 |
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| This one makes you stop and think. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/5/2005 |
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We penned Erin
enjoyed reading
William .....Peace |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/5/2005 |
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(((erin)))
a bit of dark humor in your lines--brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
love how you began and ended the poem with "i get so impatient." just wonderful!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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