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Senryu: If I Had Only Known
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, January 08, 2005
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Hug your children. Forgive enemies. Contact family members. Let them know you love them before it is too late...150,000 plus times. Dedicated with love and respect to those affected by the tsunami disaster. :(

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The hardest good-byes
Are the ones we never thought
We would have to say.
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(C) Copy written, 8 January, 2005, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain	1/12/2005

Karla, Exceptional "Senryu" my friend - a deeply profound, moving write ... outstanding!! Best wishes, Robert




Reviewed by Mary Quire	1/9/2005

Amen. Never walk away angry. M.Rose




Reviewed by jude forese	1/9/2005

the hardest good-byes are those we were prevented from saying ... poignant haiku ...




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	1/9/2005

An extremely powerful and extremely heartfelt piece, Karla.




Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)	1/9/2005

So sad... So true...




Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen	1/9/2005

so true...




Reviewed by Safi Abdi	1/9/2005

Point taken. Thank you!




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	1/8/2005

such a sad truth...




Reviewed by robin buehler	1/8/2005

so true




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	1/8/2005

Yup....




Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger	1/8/2005

Karla, a powerful reminder that needs to be told time and again. Incredible work, Poet!




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	1/8/2005

Very true oh so very true.




Reviewed by Lori Moore	1/8/2005

A heartbreaker. Great poetic truth.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	1/8/2005

Karla, You'll never know how right you are! This is something I wish everyone would heed! Thank you for sharing your compassionate heart! Love Eileen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	1/8/2005

it is the hardest goodbye of all. powerful senyru that packs a heck of a wallop, and that pic--heartwrenching! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	1/8/2005

Karla that's the truth God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	1/8/2005

Boy, you got that right, Karla! The truth is that none of us know what the next moment may hold in store for us and those we love. Life can change in the blink of an eye. This is truly excellent! Take care, Sherry

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