AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Peter Oszmann, iAnn Marquette, iRobin Leigh Miller, iGary Rodriguez, iThomas Neviaser, iRhoberta Shaler, iJoe tofuri@swbell.net, i

  Home > Reference > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Blog
· 3,672 Titles
· 17,094 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2002

OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
INQUEST ON IMHOTEP, Beyond the White Walls
by Derek Flower

A five thousand year old tomb, the gods of Ancient Egypt, secret societies, and a love story that transcends time are some of the ingredients in this mix of occultism, ar..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Age & Learning
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Saturday, January 08, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
•  I Wish U Well
•  Paper Bag Poet
•  Thorns End
•  Pissed Off People
•  Deliver Us From Evil
           >> View all 3,666

If age has nothing to do with learning, I guess we can make babies walk at one day old. Better than that, maybe we can rework the whole education system and skip grade 1 through 11. Just put juveniles in the 12th grade.
Why don't I just travel back 20 years when I was a meaner less mature person and tell whoever left this review, "age has nothing to do with learning," on my poem 20vs50, "you sound real foolish." Don't try to tell me age has nothing to do with learning, in 20 years I've learned to be less of what I'm doing now, being kind of mean and confrontational. Anyone with a problem with this, maybe you never was my friend anyway. Sobeit. This writing world is full of jealous highly critical fools anyway. Distinquish yourselfs and enjoy or whatever. I'm a very controversal writer, read my bio and my success story, I'm just tired of fools who make life miserable for everyone because they have problems themselves. A father teaches a son because he's suppose to be older and wiser. One problem with this is, the father may not have matured himself. We're suppose to learn as we mature and get older but quite a few don't. Back 20 years I go!


Dear Friends and Foes,
this is the way it goes.
I traveled back in time,
to bring Mr Hide to rhyme.
Mr Hide did mature,
but
at the moment I'm not sure.


He's lose for awhile,
to quash your smile.
After a frustrating day,
Mr Hide wants to play.
He doesn't like fools,
so now he drools.


All you fools out there,
do take care.
Try not to infect,
get your common sense correct.
If you can't repair,
then don't dispair.


We need you,
to help paint blue.
Without your word,
stupidity wouldn't be heard.
The world would be boring,
while you're snoring.


Try not to wake up,
let us enjoy,
before you destroy.


G 20 back!


 





Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 1/8/2005
yes Ed, I have been told by a very strong minded Sandie, but that's all well and good. All our friends and foes have a right to their own selfish opinions and we have a right to ours. The problem is, everyone wants to be right.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/8/2005
I guess you have been told...LOL! Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/8/2005
Well stated, Grady.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Lori Moore 1/8/2005
"We need you,
to help paint blue.
Without your word,
stupidity wouldn't be heard.
The world would be boring,
while you're snoring."

Lol... or perhaps a tear, depending on how I take it. Nice one!


Food for thought by Antoine Raphael

It's an English version of "Matière à penser"..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.