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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
2/27/2007 |
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"She smelled semen and shit in the air "
"Showing to her parents two undamaged wrists"
Excellent alpha and omega Jennifer! I enjoyed the depth and imagery....Well Done......
Peace,
Bill
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
2/27/2006 |
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Mysterious but very powerful write...i love your views about corporations that have caused a new kind of slavery.
Masood |
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| Reviewed by Joe Fleckenstein |
8/9/2005 |
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I really liked the first stanza, but was confused by the third. Could you explain the last part? I wanna know, because it was an intriguing poem. --Joe
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/10/2005 |
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| Powerfully intriguing and thought-provoking. This requires more than one reading for sure. Thank you for sharing this, Jennifer. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/9/2005 |
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| Okay this was interesting and makes leaves you wondering. |
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