|Reviewed by A PAX
|You have created a breathing couple.......this is more than poetry
this is spirit.....
no shit........I am awed!!!
|Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
|I certainly hope you are sending some of these to a publisher or twenty! This poem is essential poetry Kate! I'd like to pick a favorite line but it is impossible. They are each stand-alone good forming a piece which transcends worthiness. The artistry of this is overwhelmingly brilliant. One critique, the word crystal is not only entirely overused in poetry it is also lacking depth amongst the rich words surrounding it. A real masterpiece of writing! I read it eight times and the flowing assonance and consonance is divine art.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is very nice, Kate. Deep with inuendo and passionate verse.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|These just keep getting better - I've always loved springs teeming with life.|
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Sight-lines, warmth, the urge to purge the soul..all here.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I too am also very glad that you did not "leave this alone." So well done, Kate. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Glad you cna't leave this alone! This has been a great series.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|.Just can't seem to leave it alone! Who told you?
So glad to see you writing again. Hope and prayers for you to soon be well Kate..
Yet again your control of the written word, and images are simply superb.
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|this is a really nice writ
that turns into a better image
at the end.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|water is their medium and passion is their art ... the fluidity of your imagery is masterful ...|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|"both were always wer with the passion of liquid water colour" vivid images cannot help being provoked by tha line...nice write
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|love the imagery you create with your words, like a true artist.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|I'm with Eileen on this. Keep them coming! They are beautiful and keep getting richer. And you know how I love watercolor.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|My god Kate, why would you want to leave it alone when it
inspires you to write like this? Glorious uninhibited
kaleidoscopic magic in fluids of flamboyant favor!
Keep writing it!;-)
Love , Eileen