|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Ahhhhh! Heaven on earth. How often I've thought those words and believed that if people just took the time to examine their environment and look around them they could find joy instead of misery, could find happiness instead of problems that keep joy at a stand-off. (How do we intrepret a second-coming---is it an individualistic second-coming, or is it a world-wide phenomenon?)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Reading this was heavenly for its clarity and refreshing thoughts and unnecessary punctuation is left out....|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Most thought-provoking, Jennifer; thank you for sharing your sentiments. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Reginald Johnson
|Reading this poem was heavenly! (Pun intended!) If I could write poetry, I would use this author's work as an inspiration.
|Reviewed by Chris Davis
|I say we build.. giant fields, giant mountains, giant trees, giant oceans, giant lakes, and small cottages and villages... and blanket the world in wireless internet.|
|Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
Heaven is where you make it...even here. That is why we are here for.
Good work .
Regards, Kenneth Keith Chartrand.
|Reviewed by Fritz Barnes
|Just bee-bopping around reading your poems...and enjoying them. I like your style.|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Powerfully spoken poetry...
Riger and Birgit
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Heaven is eating strawberries and cream on a hot Californian day ;)
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Paul Nipperess BMin
Nice work, 'Fer.
Let's build heaven with words, God's words ..... :)
have a great day
|Reviewed by Albert Isaac
|I really enjoyed this poem.
What will we build?
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|awesome..loved it ..saved it!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|controlled fear is heaven ...|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Keep it all, with no fear... now that IS Heaven.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well we can leave out war and the things that we fear and keep the rest.|
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry