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Death of a Heart
by Marilyn Seray
Monday, January 17, 2005
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Your love was so wonderful
And you knew how much I loved you
Each time you held me,
I never wanted you to let me go

I wore you in my soul
Each breath was a lullaby sung
by tiny angels

I died a thousand deaths and was born
again just so that I could love you
more

Our passion had wings and
flew to paradise

Now,my motivation is lost and all I
do is remember, but the memories
bring pain.

The pain outweighs the pleasure
of the way we used to be when we
walked on shores lined with lambs

You wrecked my soul and left-
The lullabies are throbs

The angels cry and their tears
fall upon my heart like acid

The little deaths weaken me each
and every day

I have no clarity of speech
Nothing makes sense

You are gone
Everything we had is lost
And all I have left of you is the
bitter taste of loneliness

And a heart that’s close to death

© MS 1.17.05
 

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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/23/2005
So deeply moving, this is heartbreaking poetry, excellently expressed,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/21/2005
Emotively captivating and so human that no one can deny it's powerful meaning. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 1/19/2005
Hot Romantic!

TRASK
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 1/19/2005
aching!!!
this is heart~ripped
but still in place
agony at it's purest...........
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/18/2005
Touching poem...
Hi Marilyn.......
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 1/17/2005
You paint a vivid scenario with all the classic splendour of a Michelangelo oil painting! This sweeps together heaven and earth with its passion in extremis and yet your lines are elegant and clean. It leaves me feeling quite breathless and you can almost feel those "tiny" hearts and sobs becoming choked and stifled. Excellent, Marilyn, and quite beautiful poetry. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/17/2005
Hits the soul, as only a class poem can.

One feels the emotions, this write discribes..
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 1/17/2005
OUTSTANDING!!!!
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 1/17/2005
So beautifully written and soul touching write, Mele! So wonderful to read you again!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/17/2005
Oh Marilyn this touches deeply...I know the feeling all too well my dear friend!!

Welcome home!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/17/2005
Deep gut touching write. Tho loss of love is unbearable at times. Great write.
Reviewed by jude forese 1/17/2005
sad but beautifully written ...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/17/2005
Yes this is very beautiful. Nice and glad you are back.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 1/17/2005
Beautiful write Marilyn! Such a sad story though. : ( Good to read you again.

Jack
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/17/2005
How beautifully painful to read. Gorgeous poem Marilyn, deeply emotive. I miss you so much My Friend.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/17/2005
Marilyn,

O, the emotions that play out as the poem flows along--from happiness to abject loneliness and depression

Convincingly penned, the reader feels your pain--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Many powerful lines--among my favorite are

"...I wore you in my soul..."

and

"...the angels cry and their tears
fall upon my heart like acid..."

BRAVA!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/17/2005
Oh Marilyn, this is so special! Written with such impassioned emotions so deeply painful, I'm hurting from it;-)
Fantstic expressions and visuals. So good to read you again,
you have been missed my friend!(see mail;-)
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