|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So deeply moving, this is heartbreaking poetry, excellently expressed,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Emotively captivating and so human that no one can deny it's powerful meaning. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis|
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|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
this is heart~ripped
but still in place
agony at it's purest...........
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You paint a vivid scenario with all the classic splendour of a Michelangelo oil painting! This sweeps together heaven and earth with its passion in extremis and yet your lines are elegant and clean. It leaves me feeling quite breathless and you can almost feel those "tiny" hearts and sobs becoming choked and stifled. Excellent, Marilyn, and quite beautiful poetry. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Hits the soul, as only a class poem can.
One feels the emotions, this write discribes..
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|So beautifully written and soul touching write, Mele! So wonderful to read you again!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh Marilyn this touches deeply...I know the feeling all too well my dear friend!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Deep gut touching write. Tho loss of love is unbearable at times. Great write.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sad but beautifully written ...|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes this is very beautiful. Nice and glad you are back.|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Beautiful write Marilyn! Such a sad story though. : ( Good to read you again.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|How beautifully painful to read. Gorgeous poem Marilyn, deeply emotive. I miss you so much My Friend.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
O, the emotions that play out as the poem flows along--from happiness to abject loneliness and depression
Convincingly penned, the reader feels your pain--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Many powerful lines--among my favorite are
"...I wore you in my soul..."
"...the angels cry and their tears
fall upon my heart like acid..."
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh Marilyn, this is so special! Written with such impassioned emotions so deeply painful, I'm hurting from it;-)
Fantstic expressions and visuals. So good to read you again,
you have been missed my friend!(see mail;-)