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Control All the Time
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, January 21, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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No human has control all the time, once in a while it's slip and trip.

No human has control all the time,
I almost slipped on some slime.
Everyday it's a struggle,
trying not to get into a tuggle.
With all the arrogant pie in the sky fools,
practicing control at times schools.

I avoid trouble,
until the trouble I want to get into
comes along.

When the fool I hate the most,
walks in the door,
he might hit the freaking floor.

Not only in everyday life,
but also in this writing arena.

I hate rude know all don't mind
hurting peoples feelings people.

If you can't let me down nice,
I might slip on your ice.
Slid right in your door,
to even the score.

Other than this I keep a strong hold,
on the animal known as control.
I try to choke the chicken,
and keep it ticking.

I'm just another human trying,
don't want be in this world frying.
Control is very important,
to reduce always being a combatant.

Having faith truly helps,
Jesus turned the other cheek,
but us humans aren't that meek.

We slip!


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Reviewed by Sue Hess
there is enough pain and sadness in the world as it it without us adding to it here in a place where we supposedly support art...your poem expresses the frustration rude people cause in even the mildest nature. go grady
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
so true! stay strong, and keep on keeping on!

(((HUGS))), love, and prayers~ as always, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by George Carroll
How true. Don't let them get to you.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Good poem Grady!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Way to go Grady and I ditto your sentiments here.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Glad it's 'just a poem,' Grady - but it's a very good one.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
just poems people, slipping in word is much better than slipping in real life. G
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