|Reviewed by Ms Beeds
|I gotta say - you made me smile - and while doing nothing more that recreating a conversation that I am certain occurs btwn XX's and XY's everyday - chortle. Well done! I feel like I am living moments like this several times each day - most often at others expense - but what the hell - we only have to amuse ourselves!(Note: I am an XY masquerading as an XX - Laf! I should have been born a man!)|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|hahahahaha wonderful witty piece Danny!
You are one of a kind mate!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh dear, this was too funny, and too close to how someone I know is, very entertaining!
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Laugh a minute you are, wicked sense of humour. Since the title became almost like her mantra, it doesn't surprise she became your ex .... girlfriend, that is :) Love the last stanza !!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Reviewed by Nila Jamier
|Oh THIS IS WONDERFUL AND SO REAL I LOVE THE CONVERSATION AND MY FAVORITE FOR ANY TRIP:) NILA
Thank you for reading my poem.
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Faster than a speeding bullet! Able to leap tall stories in a single bound (unless it's round-trip) AND... craftier than a fox in a hen house... That's Super DannyMac! Yee-haaaaaa!
Jaysus, sweetie pie, do I see myself in this or what??!! hehe... analyze, proselytize, harmonize, simonize (??)... poke 'em in their irrational daze. You took the wind outta her sails and made me fall to the floor, weak with laughter. Gee, this was hilarious! katydid xox
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Hilariously done, Daniel. Thanks for the laughs. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
An absolute riot. :) I've been to Kentucky, love, love, love it--and I'd go again in a minute! Thank you for this laugh filled journey--excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
If yer gonna play the horses, you need more n' eleven dollars :)
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Speaking from a resident of Kentucky, I can tell you that the chicken can be found here, but I'm sure you could just turn a corner where ever you happen to be and find it there as well. As for the ten dollars, have you priced gasoline lately?
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Hahahaha great! Loved this.|
|Reviewed by E Detetcheverrie
|Huh...the last time I went to Kentucky, all it cost me was my job!
The chicken was great there, by the way.
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Hmm...I should probably clarify something here. When I say "ex", I mean "ex-girlfriend." I've never been married. Maybe her reactions here are somewhat exaggerated, but she really did have a friend who said he accomplished this. She thought that was so cool, the above title became like her mantra. Said it all the time. Yeesh.|
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Hope you threw in two changes of clothing?|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|LOL ... finger-licking good ...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|HO HO! Were you and I perhaps married to the same ex?!
But I must have mellowed in my old age, when my current wife tells a story like that - I now just say - very good!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I'm laughing out loud.
Thanks for the kick start..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hahahahaha only you!!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|it must be in the genes....still laughing...a great write for an X..|
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|My question was where did this trip start? You could make it to Kentucky from Indiana without a change or clothes, any money or chicken. You wouldn't need the change of clothes to make it from Ohio, Tennessee, Missouri or Georgia either, but would probably need the eleven dollars, and maybe the chicken if coming from Georgia or Missouri. You let her off easy.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So.....you are telling us this is how you became the ex? Thanks for the laughs :-)|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Hey, MP, whats wrong with you...? Hell, 11 bucks some clothes and a bucket of chicken is enough to live a life on...;) Was it regular or extra crispy chicken cause if it were either that could change the whole scenario...? Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I think she owes YOU the dinner and a change of clothes for being such a snit about your perfectly honest questions.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Okay now this is really funny and I would have asked the same question. Call me quirky that way. Actually here chicken costs about $14.00 and another thing was it Kentucky Fried Chicken?|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I 'm laughing so hard I can't type! Okay now;-)
Wow!This is priceless. I agree with Sherry, you
would have to be an ex if you kept that up;-)!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|I can understand why you are her ex-husband, Daniel. She is a better woman than I though, I probably would have harmed you for ruining my story...I bet it wasn't the first or the last time you did it either. LOL...Men, Can't live with them, Can't shoot them.