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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
1/26/2005 |
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| What a fascinating poem this is. I learnt something new and once again marvelled at your delivery. Kate you are far too humble. I know I sound like I am gushing but you really are one of the best poets on the den. Fantastic work! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/23/2005 |
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Completing the cycle. Beautiful, the perfection of nature.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/23/2005 |
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| Very informative, insightful write. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
1/23/2005 |
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As Life Dissolves Not Revolves Thru Closing Fast Door!
Excellent!
TRASK
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
1/23/2005 |
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| An alluring perspective. Blessings, Vicky |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/23/2005 |
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| i'm sure your college professor will be impressed ... |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
1/23/2005 |
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Awesome write, Kate.
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/23/2005 |
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| Yes you do well and now you must be true first to yourself. In that what your tutors should expect is your artistic freedom to be you. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/23/2005 |
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A+. Distinction.
You amaze me. You learn fast. Then write in an interesting, and factual way.
You have a real talent. Top of the form... |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
1/23/2005 |
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| The last two lines blow me away! Fantastic write, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
1/23/2005 |
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Chilling beauty!
Saandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/23/2005 |
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i loved this; beautiful slice of life into inuit culture; always has fascinated me! very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/23/2005 |
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Again another superb write, having experienced them (icebergs) up close and personnel I still see the beauty of them in my minds eye thirty years after sailing throughout them and breaking through the pack ice of the North. Their intensity is overwhelming.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
1/23/2005 |
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Great write Kate! Im no help to you with these words, Im not even very good at english! lol
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/23/2005 |
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| Bless you, Karla! Thank you so much - should I therefore change my references from Inuit to Inuk or Inupiat, d'ya think?! K xx |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/23/2005 |
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| This is truly a gem that you have polished for our delightful reading. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/23/2005 |
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Kate,
You move up to the head of the class with this outstanding write! The word, "Iluliaq," is actually West Greenlandic Inupiat. (Not that I speak it, mind you, I've just done a lot of research on the Inuk peoples.)
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"Iluliaq--"Iceberg".
Born to dissolve
its Spirit of the Ages
into waters that evaporate
and drop again as rain:
Understanding falling
on a thirsting generation."
I find it fascinating how ancient peoples explained natural phenomena, things beyond their comprehension and control. :) Very well written, I give you an A ++++! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
1/23/2005 |
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A superb and well informed write Kate, your tutors should be proud of you I know if you were one of my students you would be top of the class...I like apples lol!
Nice work kate thank you for sharing
Paul:-} |
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