|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|What a fascinating poem this is. I learnt something new and once again marvelled at your delivery. Kate you are far too humble. I know I sound like I am gushing but you really are one of the best poets on the den. Fantastic work!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Completing the cycle. Beautiful, the perfection of nature.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very informative, insightful write.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|As Life Dissolves Not Revolves Thru Closing Fast Door!
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
|An alluring perspective. Blessings, Vicky|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i'm sure your college professor will be impressed ...|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Awesome write, Kate.
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes you do well and now you must be true first to yourself. In that what your tutors should expect is your artistic freedom to be you.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
You amaze me. You learn fast. Then write in an interesting, and factual way.
You have a real talent. Top of the form...
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|The last two lines blow me away! Fantastic write, Kate.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Saandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i loved this; beautiful slice of life into inuit culture; always has fascinated me! very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Again another superb write, having experienced them (icebergs) up close and personnel I still see the beauty of them in my minds eye thirty years after sailing throughout them and breaking through the pack ice of the North. Their intensity is overwhelming.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Great write Kate! Im no help to you with these words, Im not even very good at english! lol
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Bless you, Karla! Thank you so much - should I therefore change my references from Inuit to Inuk or Inupiat, d'ya think?! K xx|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|This is truly a gem that you have polished for our delightful reading.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You move up to the head of the class with this outstanding write! The word, "Iluliaq," is actually West Greenlandic Inupiat. (Not that I speak it, mind you, I've just done a lot of research on the Inuk peoples.)
I particularly enjoyed
Born to dissolve
its Spirit of the Ages
into waters that evaporate
and drop again as rain:
on a thirsting generation."
I find it fascinating how ancient peoples explained natural phenomena, things beyond their comprehension and control. :) Very well written, I give you an A ++++! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A superb and well informed write Kate, your tutors should be proud of you I know if you were one of my students you would be top of the class...I like apples lol!
Nice work kate thank you for sharing