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Paint the Town
by M. R. B.
Monday, January 24, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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city lights
flashing neon
pulsating penumbras
rhythm heat 
silky legs - stiletto heels
tight asses - flashing hair
come-hither-take-me glances
slip between tongues
licking lips moist with lust
by the last drink or
round-the-clock desperation
rounding off emotions
dancing perpendicular to
concrete sidewalks
wishing tomorrow
would stay beyond the
 ©  MRD 1990 (revised 2001)


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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 4/20/2005

Steamy write ... rhymed, versed, and imaged to excellence!!


Reviewed by Dale Clark 2/1/2005
Fabulous, sensuous and passionate piece.
Write on!
Reviewed by E. Richardson 1/31/2005
very tight, very visual...this catches those little moments of clarity that such evenings are composed, crystal clear images, rather like snapshots. you have also combined an array of emotion here...physical lust, sensuality, desperation, depression...and a subtle but powerful hint of uninhibited joy of life. Well done, Mari.
Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu 1/31/2005
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 1/31/2005

Poetry's compliance flows in "Paint the Town" and shows the voice of a poetic magnificence through its wise lines.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/30/2005
Conjours up my wasted youth.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 1/27/2005
Powerful write
God Bless
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/25/2005
The imagery in your verses impresses upon the mind of the reader most effectively, Mari. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese 1/25/2005
i really like the brisk imagery ...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/25/2005
This is really interesting to me because a group of college boys tried that same thing in a town. They took a can of red paint.
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 1/25/2005

"Paint the Town"
Colorful, and vivid imagery.
Easy reading, thank you for sharing.

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