|Reviewed by Shawn Field
|At first I was hesitant, in the beginning of this read; then, I found its rhythm, beat, and flow . . . even read it twice more to make sure
I understood the feel. Oh the feel! Thank You for this write.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Wonderful, Mitz, simply wonderful. And your picture has acrease in it. ;-)
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Your 'poetic' thoughts are that of a flowing river, with all its majestic beauty and grace ... sensational work here!!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Unique Done Different Good...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Enrapting creation, Mitzi. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|May your poetry bring fame.
Vaya con Dios
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
A quiet strength resonates in each word--exceptional imagery and emotion makes the poem come alive! BRAVA, Poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
|Wow.. so powerful and delivered with such grace! Quite the masterpiece.. thanks for sharing...
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|One great pen of thought|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This Mitzi is outstanding verse filled with exciting images that only a master poet like yourself could muster...beautiful work.
|Reviewed by Nila Jamier
|This is such an outstanding and poetic poem so much evolves in your verses emotions and expression.
"“Have you ever ran barefoot
over glass filled clouds
winds bearing angels
The Lords Prayer?
days where rain waters
brought an uncertain pain
not from birth
and you bear it?”"
Thank you for reading my poem.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Mitzi...this is awesome!
What I found most penetrating about these verses (aside from some
really brilliant metaphors) was the repitition of: "I am only a man..."
The rythym in this is really good!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is very beautiful Mitzi....this touched me!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent integrity, full of depth and a very moving ending ...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is just so moving and beautiful Mitzi. Deeply emotive, can almost "hear" the dialogue.|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Beautiful portrait of desire and desire fulfilled. Intertwined voices of the narrator with that of the characters pull the readers deep inside both the action and the "truth reflecting" emotion of the piece. Extremely nice write.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is a wonderful piece so full of spirit, love and hope to inspire all who are unsure in love.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The imagery is as real as the lover in this splendid write|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Yet another extremely powerful piece, Mitzi, and I love your ending.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Amazing and wonderful.|
|Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
|Depth of singular affinity. Incredible!|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Nicely done, Mitzi. Well developed; engaging read; love the last stanza. Perfect photo!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Mitzi you paint the words like no one else an
impassioned masterpiece with traces of wistful
longing so painful and the dream is not yet real
but still hoped for...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Twice I've read this. Well it is 05:30 am..
To her he is an egnima, "is he for real" kinda thing.
One feels her longing.
Excellence With the images. Like how the flow changes pace.
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This one makes for a compelling read.|