|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|I like your writing, Jeff.|
|Reviewed by June Thompson
|this is a very good point to be made
and no you can not lose something you never had
I've said this many a time....
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
The ending speaks right out of my soul.
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|and i've found
i should have known
that even love...
doesn't always last.
..ok..NOW you have me tearey-eyed..darn!
This has touched the far reaches of my soul..
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Wonderfully written! This poem radiates with powerful sincerity and transmites the feelings of deep regret and lost love.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|love the words and sound this offered
sad~ness to it
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul-reaching, Jeff. I can barely see the screen because of my tears. Love and peace. Regis
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Beautiful Jeff. : )|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes this is beautifully penned.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Beautifully penned Jeff. Smooth as fine silk.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|good one Jeff, get your helmet on, crash proof, losing love isn't the worst thing we can write about, true or untrue. Right now I wish love was the only thing I had to write about losing.Wish I could write this high blood pressure, high cholestrol and all these poison pills I have to take off. G|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Deep touching write Jeff...I can relate ever so well with this one!!
Warm Love Tinka
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Jeff, this touches the heart so deeply, excellently written, It would make an excellent song,
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|this is such a beautiful (and sad) write!! very touching|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|Hey Jeff, :) I am so pleased that I am one of the first to comment on this lovely construction. It is quite lovely since it ets to the plateau that most of us are aware, though often may seldom admit (it)
Stuff like this is so wonderful adn soothing, it just speaks right things, liked the river, finally, abriged, to be a bit poetic there, thanks so much Jeff, a real admirer, Al