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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
1/30/2005 |
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| Tears spilled in response to this deeply moving piece. What a deep sensitive soul you are William. Love Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/28/2005 |
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| Sadly moving and captivating verses, William. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Nila Jamier |
1/28/2005 |
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This is stunning beauty reminds me of a fairytale this is of royale grace.
"For her realm
To pass in review
Before the loveliness, she once was
A sadden soul
A heart that mourns.
Tears that fall on hallow ground
I bow my head
To see a yellow rose
Where my tears, once fell. "
:)
Thank you for reading my poem.
Nila |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/28/2005 |
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| A powerfully sad piece, William. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
1/28/2005 |
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| Very beautiful tribute to someone who lives on. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
1/28/2005 |
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Depicting a heart that misses a loved one, "A Kiss for A Princess" resuscitates memories and pays homage to beauty and love.
Healthy Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/28/2005 |
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| Beautifully heart touching William. I love this one. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
1/28/2005 |
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A beautiful write that is well-expressed.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/28/2005 |
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| Yellow for friendship.. Just imagine it was the poss' princess Camila..eeck |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/27/2005 |
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Beautiful....this touched the heart....hope you are okay buddy!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/27/2005 |
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Very beautiful and sad William,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
1/27/2005 |
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Painfully sad and beautiful poetry, William. Very nice write,
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/27/2005 |
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So poignant, and beautifully written William!
wrenches the heart..
Love,Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/27/2005 |
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Oh, William this is so beautiful and so sad, brings tears to my eyes
a brilliant write, my friend
Peace and love, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/27/2005 |
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| Painful write, but a kiss can do no harm...from a prince to his princess...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
1/27/2005 |
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| wow, this is a very sad write, William, but very touching as well. |
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