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Knight of Dreams
by Chanti Niven

Friday, January 28, 2005
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The castle in my dreams stands. It is a place I visit. Perhaps the eagle is my muse


She said goodbye that day
He didn't say a word
The symbolic eagle
lost from sight
What pain he hath endured!
Why did their paths converge
when castle walls were scaled?
What happened
to their view of love?
Has every dream now paled?
Surrounded by the darkness
the castle walls her keep,
a turret room the lookout
granting vision in her sleep
In love she made a choice
the hardest one to make
to cling to dreams is easy
She made the choice to wake…

© Chanti 2005
  
 

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Reviewed by Susan Gilson 1/27/2007
Romanticizing, mystique through dreams – holding that which is not –Absolutely mesmeric!

Hugs, Susan

Reviewed by Chuck Keller 11/11/2006
I love writing and reading about dreams and fantasy. Exquisite poem here. I loved it!
Reviewed by L. Figgins 2/8/2005
Yes, it takes courage to relinquish a dream and face the cold, alone...
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 1/30/2005
Chanti,

Beautiful picture ... an inspirational masterpiece - superb!!


Best to you,

Robert
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 1/30/2005
Chanti,

The atmosphere, alone, lured me in, willingly. The meter and rhyme floats, made me sigh audibly. To write the human condition, accessibly, yet so poetically, is a gift. We wish to draw a reader in with theme, so she can relate, yet express in a way that will linger. For me, you have done this with beauty and with honesty. I gasped, reading those last two lines. This is an exquisite piece. katy xox.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/29/2005
I too agree with Elga, an excellent write...
Reviewed by jude forese 1/29/2005
outstanding poem! sometimes when we choose to wake we find we're simply dreaming again ...
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/28/2005
This is awesome, Chanti!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/28/2005
Love like your poem can be a process of learning the good and the bad, the happy and the sad. You covered this really well.

Smooth write,

Felix
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/28/2005
Chanti, a stunnung poem, deeply stirs the emotions!
I agree with Elga, the last lines are outstanding.
To wake from the dream is almost too much to bear,

Love,eileen
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 1/28/2005
This is such a sad poem, with a beauty that truly hurts. Just remember, to choose to wake is not the final choice you'll have to make; but ask yourself why and when you believe you'll dream again.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 1/28/2005
My sentiments are much akin to Elga's...seems we both see the
same brilliance in your lines, Chanti.
"Waking" can be wonderful at times, but it depends on the sight
we behold when we finally open our eyes.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/28/2005
Chanti,

A haunting, most beautiful poem--very vividly expressed emotion! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/28/2005
Your missing Surrey to much.

Poignant miss, miss.

Hope all is well with your friend. Been kept in my prayers..
Reviewed by George Jackson 1/28/2005
A beautiful poem that haunts.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/28/2005
Insightful read Chanti!!

Keep well!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sue Hess 1/28/2005
this is fantastic, not only beautiful words but a great message
Reviewed by Lori Moore 1/28/2005
Excellent message.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/28/2005
Extremely insightful and well written.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/28/2005
"In love she made a choice
the hardest one to make
to cling to dreams is easy
She made the choice to wake…"
There is so much meaning in these verses but the entire poetic creation is captivating in a surreal way (to me, anyhow). Thank you, Chanti. Love. Regis
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 1/28/2005
Dearest Chants,

I don't often comment on your poetry, but this one, the more I read, the more the tears welled, and felt choked with such emotion. It is excellent in its entirety, but girl, your last four lines, speak volumes:

In love she made a choice
the hardest one to make
to cling to dreams is easy
She made the choice to wake… ----> some of us don't have the courage to wake :(

God Bless Chants
Much love
Elga
Reviewed by A PAX 1/28/2005
excellent!
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/28/2005
Yes this is bitter sweet and poignant like Paul said it is.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 1/28/2005
A bitter sweet and poginant write dear friend.

Paul;-}
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