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Someday
by Sue Hess

Friday, January 28, 2005
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He said it wasnít a baby
It was just a seven day overdue period
His words sliced into her heart
And into the core of her dreams
She had believed him when he said he loved her
And talked of the family they would have
Someday
Thatís the thing of it he said
Not noticing the tears in her eyes
Someday is not now
And Iím not ready right now
And he walked away
No thought of what they had created
The beauty of a child borne of their love
He tossed the thought away like an old tissue
And she felt the same way
Used and dirtied, then tossed away
Because it wasnít the right time
Because it wasnít
someday

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Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/30/2005
Sue, my friend,
I don't know if this is from a personnel experience or not but I feel the pain of it in your words. I can look into my minds eye and see the tears on your cheek and my arms long to hold you as a friend and tell you all will be ok.

A big hug,
Your friend...Felix
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/29/2005
Truth is often not happy. Well done, Sue. You are dealing with life and sharing your input which we appreciate. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by George Jackson 1/29/2005
Sue, I'd have to agree with Eileen. You truly do have a way of breathing life into...well...life. A great poem.
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 1/29/2005
this about sums it up, Sue. nicely done!
Best,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 1/29/2005
This seems to be scenario quite often these days Sue. Unfortunately most walk away, whether there really is a baby or not.
Truly a sad depiction of life.

Lisa
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/29/2005
Outstanding piece Sue!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 1/29/2005
A splendid write Sue.

Take care
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 1/29/2005
I know a couple that is going through this and I really feel for the woman ... Another great write from you, Sue ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/28/2005
Sue you write these real life experiences better than anyone I know. Your blogs are great too!;-)

Eileen
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/28/2005
These kind of persons give the majority of men a bad name.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/28/2005
Yes it is a sad day but you know what when he said it to me. I just said keep on going. Mine is thirty five and the only one that I had. Poignanat write Sue.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/28/2005
Sue,

And it never will be. :( Heartwrending, powerful write--poignantly penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/28/2005
A truly sad scenario, Sue.
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