|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
...As the starry night lights go out one by one...
...Mallards paddling two by two...
...In this, my quiet time, as the world yawns...
Oh Sherry. You are the most Magnificent Artist. Your eyes behold the beauty of the world and just brings that morning forth before mine.
Exquisitely superb. / (I wish I knew other words to describe this undescribable poem of sheer beauty)
Thank You so much xoox
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Absolutely beautiful poetry, Sherry! Thank you!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Written with such beauty. You make the Desrt Dawn visiable to all who read this work.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You have illustrated the mystic nuance that is the desert. Makes me wish I could visit more and let its stark sun parse me to my simple essence like all the lives there very long.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|These are words this reader can feel
and that is a powerful reach
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wonderful poetry with an ending that is sublime and divine.|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Very colorful and poetic; a lovely ending.
Joy and sunshine
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|You paint a beautiful picture with your words, Sherry. That is the ultimate, is not it, to become one with our Creator.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Sherry, What a masterpiece! I swear I was transported to your favorite Desert place!
Absolutely stunning work. I must keep this one, my friend.
The vibrant colors just reach out and grasp the mind, I can't tell you how close this made it all become.
Great write Sherry! Just great.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Super Sherry, "I peacefully breathe in the wonders of this land." Many times I do this. G|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Beautiful imagery! Soothing and serene! I love the dawn of the day and you have painted the "Desert Dawn" to perfection! Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Sherry this is incredibly beautiful, such images!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh Sherry, how lovely this is, such beautiful imagery in this excellent and lovely poem,
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
very inspiring to get out there
and take in nature's mornings!!!
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Awesome, stunning, vivid imagery, wonderful cadence, provocative message...Somebody stop me! :-)
Great work, Sherry.
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|You can always tell the quality of a poem by the way your mind without effort finds it's way into seeing and feeling each line. I really felt I was there. TY|
|Reviewed by Nila Jamier
|Beautiful imagery and ambience in your poem Sherry!
"In this, my quiet time, as the world yawns
I peacefully breathe in the wonders of this land
And become one with the Creator of it all"
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Makes me wish I still lived out west. You have captured the essence of the desert wonderfully.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Too real, makes me wish I was sitting there having a cup of coffee and watching this tremendous scene unfold with you. I have never been to your edge of the world but your description sure puts a longing in my heart to see it some day.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|C'est merveilleux, Sherry. Merci! Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutely stunning piece Sherry!!
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Absolutely beautiful poetry, such a wonderful sense of peace and serenity exuding from your words, gorgeous write Sherry.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|exceptional imagery and wonderful mood into a truly inspired direction ...|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Sherry, this one is inexplicably beautiful. I'm going to keep it and imagine myself in the midst of a desert dawn during my own morning meditation time. Surrounded by menacing icicles (in Atlanta!), Dawn|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Sherry I don't know if I can do you any justice with my words of praise. I am stunned by the power and beauty of your words in this magnificent poem! I can't say more because I fear I will sound insincere. Please just know that this is one that I will keep and savour. Truly beautiful!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A keeper for sure! What splendid imagery in this gem Sherry!
I can get lost in the ambiance you created and the vivd
word painting, visuals are fantastic!
here's another url I thought you might want for your great blog:-)
I send messages to the soldiers on it.
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes Michelle is right this one is really a wonderful way to start the evening here.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Fine wine indeed.
Just love these images.
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|Ah, this is like sipping a fine wine. Smooth, delightful, sensual. Loved it Sherry! Michelle|