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  the Dreams of Tomorrow
by jude forese
Saturday, January 29, 2005
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Wandering through streets
Through the tattered landscape of iron and glass

Through the montage of memory
Forming as a vision of tomorrow

Through daily prayers
Of common ground and shared psychosis

Of alienated beings interacting
Within life and dreams of better days

I know out there, somewhere
In the vast databases of the neon-horizon
In the clothes of the oppressed onlookers
In the paralyzed genes of distant lands
Awaits a vision of light
Awaits the resurrected being of creation
Pulsating like a glorious flood
Of melodic prophesy

I look up to the moon
Uncommonly bright tonight
And see the animal in mankind
Looking back
To the ground below
Right through me
Like a laser-guided realization
Of what may or may not be

I wonder of the streets at night
And of a world
Exchanging a fantasy of real experience

Happiness and horror
Like a field of broken glass

Like a teardrop drowning
In a pool of blood

I am not so much concerned now
With how I can change the world today

But how I can succeed in changing
The dreams of tomorrow
  



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Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 2/10/2005
Dear Jude,

"The Dreams of Tomorrow" are indeed the ones we should try and change, as it can be done with, love, care, passion, compassion and loads of understanding, so here's to both you and me and any others who desire, in succeeding with the changes. Truly enjoyed Jude :)

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/6/2005
Today we can make tomorrow's dreams come true.

Ron
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/31/2005
Excellent write, Robert...
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 1/30/2005
Thoughtfully engaging write, Sir Ace.
Reviewed by Michelle Mills 1/30/2005
I agree with Tiana...this is wise, beautiful, and full of important imagery. Spoken with simplicity, and elegance. Michelle
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 1/30/2005
So much truth and wisdom in your beautiful poem, Jude ...
Reviewed by George Jackson 1/30/2005
I wish I could convey, Robert, how much I like what I read here at the Den sometimes...I'd make a lousy critic (a blessing I think). Odd quirk, a poet that can't find sufficient words to praise a work they enjoyed, but I truly enjoyed this.
Reviewed by Nila Jamier 1/30/2005
"I know out there, somewhere
In the vast databases of the neon-horizon
In the clothes of the oppressed onlookers
In the paralyzed genes of distant lands
Awaits a vision of light
Awaits the resurrected being of creation
Pulsating like a glorious flood
Of melodic prophesy "
powerful visuals and assesments.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/30/2005
Wisdom shines in this write. Keep dreaming :-)
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/30/2005
Robert this is suberb and I agree with Judith I think this is from your soul and mastered by your heart. Well done.

Felix
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 1/30/2005
hey Robert, tht is so interesting to change dreams of tomorrow then, considerig its probably birthplace now, would not dreams arise from now ?, the current quasi status quo, oh maybe there is a hidden stream, forgotten, Al
Reviewed by Judith Bailey 1/30/2005
Robert, this is spoken through your Soul... and it appears you've left the Old behind you. The Dreams of Tomorrow... yes! That is what keeps my creative juices pursuing emergence. This poem inspires me (happiness and horror like a field of glass...) ... What a Gift you've given us.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 1/30/2005
I love this juxtaposition of solid, perennial, urban image against the backcloth of ephemera. The future of mankind is shaped by the formulation of vision that focuses human activity and galvanises it forwards. Otherwise it can sometimes seem like we are sucked into the vortex created by "dead men drowning"... well-meaning, but powerless to help. A subliminal sense of vulnerability and danger here, I think, too: you see the potential for "horror", but major always on the "hope", which I like. Of such is the future of mankind made secure. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Aberjhani 1/30/2005
A very stirring transformative vision of where we are as a species and where we likely need to go.
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/30/2005
All of the dreams of tomorrow start today. Great imagery of which you are a master. Well done and I agree with Sara's remarks.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 1/30/2005
Robert - I wish you the best of luck in accomplishing your reengineering of the human psyche. Without a doubt, your poetry is one very big step in doing so. The next is in getting your message out to a wider audience than the AD crowd of a thousand. Your poetry is always so remarkable. It always leaves me speechless. Well almost speechless. LOL... ~ Sara
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/30/2005
I am not so much concerned now
With how I can change the world today

But how I can succeed in changing
The dreams of tomorrow


YES!! Brilliant write Jude. Profound thoughts.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/30/2005
Deep emotive piece Robert!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/29/2005
Yet from space, Planet Earth looks stunning and tranquil, unlike any other in the solar system.

Great poem and aspirations the ACE..
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/29/2005
excellent write Robert

William .....Peace
Reviewed by Janet Parker 1/29/2005
You are making a change. You may never know how, but you are being used. You touch lives and they touch other lives. This is beautifully written and thought provoking.
Reviewed by Ryan Kelly (Reader) 1/29/2005
Great write. I had the read the last part a few times,but finally I understood your meaning. I first read it with the mindset that what we do today changes tommorrow. Then I realized that it was not being concerned for yourself, but for our young. Again, nice write.
Reviewed by Lori Moore 1/29/2005
The dreams of tomorrow are worth our best efforts. Nice one.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/29/2005
Forget walking those mean streets, get thee back to the beach and ocean and breathe in the oceans medicinal salt...or sewage, depending on the beach you do go too...Ed
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/29/2005
But how I can succeed in changing the dreams of tomorrow. I think this sums up the whole poem.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/29/2005
Hopefully there will be many tomorrows for we dreamers of a better dream. always enjoy your insights Robert.....
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/29/2005
This is pointed and sharp, Robert and cuts through all the prattle to the heart of the matter. It is not all about what we can do today, but what we prepare for our children and grandchildren that will ultimately change the world and the heart of man; we must each be part of the subtle changes or all of mankind will parish from the earth. This is an incredible write! Solid verses with lots of great lines.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Dave Harm 1/29/2005
Emotional poem that speaks the truth. The dreams of tomorrow, not for ourselves, but the next generation.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/29/2005
Robert, powerful emotions in this one. Great write as always.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

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