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  Succubus
by Paul Williams
Monday, January 31, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Erotica with a twist lol


 

Succubus


 

Oh shimmering siren that visits my bed

in moonlight shades of red and green

I drink you in with the woeful arrogance

that has clouded time-lagged memories.

 

A kiss like snow that melts upon petal’d’ lips

lingering for the sensation of taste

permeates my soul,  captured

in a fog-shrouded coat

disguised as passion,

 

within deep am I enraptured…

with this soul hunter

whose libation stirs muscles

with the musky odours of love

by dawn turning them to dust.

 

‘Eldritch Witch!’

 

You may forget me

or fail to hear the breathless

wind sneak to whisper my name…

 

But I know where you live

Bitch.

 

© P Williams 2005

 
 




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Reviewed by Saberi Roy 8/29/2007
something dark about it. well written
Reviewed by Peggy Kelly (Reader) 8/27/2007
very intense and interesting
Reviewed by Winter Knight 8/8/2007
I love this you have a talent for description!
Reviewed by Michael Hemingway 8/3/2007
Good poem and even better picture! Imagery and lyricism were also good! Your ending is too shocking for me, though, as a guy, well, you know how succubi are! Sort of reminds me of that long line scene within the movie, Airport, aboard the plane to silence or quiet the hysterical stewardess! Take a number or be first in line!
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 7/15/2007
I have this pict. and another of a succub.
This didn't enter my active mind Paul!
Good on you!
YOu miss someoneee...
A gem I will treasure!
:)
Stay Positive!
STay SAFE!
:)
WArm hugs, Warrior Lady, SG
Reviewed by E. Richardson 7/12/2007
Paul...this is outstanding! Much closer to the legends of the succubi then my work, Cravings, which is based on that subject as well.
You have blended perfectly the eroticism and spine chilling aspects of the legend...and added a bit of payback...well done!
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 6/28/2007
OOOOO Deep, Dark and Delicious! You sound dangerous. SC
Reviewed by R Beeman 6/23/2007
wonderful to tell i must say. an erotic thought provoking write.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 6/13/2007
Sounds like someone is going for lunch.Well done.
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett 5/18/2007
VERY EROTIC AND EXOTIC.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/23/2007
Paul,

DAYUM. This one is intense and effectively chilling!!!! Well done!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 4/18/2006

The tale of SUCCUBUS/INCUBUS saved many people from the guillotine, GAS-CHAMBER and CASTRATION.

This composition, "Succubus" takes my mind to twenty-five centuries of thrillers and mysteries... I enjoyed the contents and the reading of "Succubus".

Healthy Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/14/2005
Vivid and alive this grabs you right from the title, this is the first of your work I have read but I will be adding you to my favs. By the way any chance of sharing that address?

Felix
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 3/2/2005
Dear Paul,
You mentioned that I had not responded to this poem. I had read it but it disturbed me so deeply I could not respond. You write superbly well (too well maybe) and it brought it all too much to life for me. The concept of a 'succubus' entity is a frightening one.
Love Chanti (Now you know I read it. Am I a baby or what?)
Reviewed by A PAX 3/1/2005
lol
i like this........I wrote a poem about an incubus sometime back.....its an interesting concept.
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 2/10/2005
Oh, my. Those succubi most run amuck in Merry Ole England. I think Ian Thorpe is also troubled by such. LOL Damn, where are all the incubi?

Loved the write, Paul.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/5/2005
Horror with a twist, Paul. Well done. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 2/4/2005
Great write, Paul!
Reviewed by Mary Quire 2/2/2005
Interesting picture. Even more interesting poem. I do like the ending. Best wishes.

M.Rose
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 1/31/2005
LOL
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
oH well you get what i'm saying...enjoyed
this what a wonderful surprise!!!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/31/2005
outstanding Paul
Well Penned

William ....Peace
Reviewed by F William Broome 1/31/2005
A fine piece.... of writing..... but I ain't going there!
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 1/31/2005
Is Andy out to rattle my bars on your pages, or what??!! I hope he's not talking about me!! Woah, scary lady!! This is excellently penned, Paul, and is a taste of real "Goth": your diction and tone are brilliant. Even the "twist" is pure Jekyll and Hyde. I am impressed by your restraint; for the subject matter, I am sure many of us would have been tempted to "pad out" the obvious tale in this, but you have kept it delightfully "clean" (??!!) with just the telling detail that makes it muscular. Can just feel the "cold, hard kiss" with this one - metaphorically speaking! AND you manage to maintain your poetic tone! Very well done, TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/31/2005
Wow....what a ending....watch out...be on alert...but then again nightmare do happen!!

Love Tinka :)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 1/31/2005
Yes it well penned and like you said it had a surprise ending.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/31/2005
Oh my, this one is compelling. Well penned Paul.
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 1/31/2005
Dear Paul,

Oh the "Nightmare" very vivid indeed, the picture is amazing. Excellent write, but I have come to expect this quality from you ;) I daresay, don't venture too close to where she lives lol.

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/31/2005
Yup she sure sounds like many brit gurls I've met.

Paul; the yanky ones are the best.

Just keep the accent..
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/31/2005
oh my! you've been succubussed;-)
Paul, a very heady spell from hell;-)
Excellent write!
Reviewed by Sue Hess 1/31/2005
i love the way this started and ended...

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