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| Reviewed by Saberi Roy |
8/29/2007 |
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| something dark about it. well written |
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| Reviewed by Peggy Kelly (Reader) |
8/27/2007 |
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| very intense and interesting |
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| Reviewed by Winter Knight |
8/8/2007 |
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| I love this you have a talent for description! |
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| Reviewed by Michael Hemingway |
8/3/2007 |
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| Good poem and even better picture! Imagery and lyricism were also good! Your ending is too shocking for me, though, as a guy, well, you know how succubi are! Sort of reminds me of that long line scene within the movie, Airport, aboard the plane to silence or quiet the hysterical stewardess! Take a number or be first in line! |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/15/2007 |
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I have this pict. and another of a succub.
This didn't enter my active mind Paul!
Good on you!
YOu miss someoneee...
A gem I will treasure!
:)
Stay Positive!
STay SAFE!
:)
WArm hugs, Warrior Lady, SG |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
7/12/2007 |
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Paul...this is outstanding! Much closer to the legends of the succubi then my work, Cravings, which is based on that subject as well.
You have blended perfectly the eroticism and spine chilling aspects of the legend...and added a bit of payback...well done! |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
6/28/2007 |
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| OOOOO Deep, Dark and Delicious! You sound dangerous. SC |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
6/23/2007 |
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wonderful to tell i must say. an erotic thought provoking write.
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
6/13/2007 |
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| Sounds like someone is going for lunch.Well done. |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
5/18/2007 |
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| VERY EROTIC AND EXOTIC. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/23/2007 |
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Paul,
DAYUM. This one is intense and effectively chilling!!!! Well done!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/18/2006 |
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The tale of SUCCUBUS/INCUBUS saved many people from the guillotine, GAS-CHAMBER and CASTRATION.
This composition, "Succubus" takes my mind to twenty-five centuries of thrillers and mysteries... I enjoyed the contents and the reading of "Succubus".
Healthy Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/14/2005 |
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Vivid and alive this grabs you right from the title, this is the first of your work I have read but I will be adding you to my favs. By the way any chance of sharing that address?
Felix |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
3/2/2005 |
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Dear Paul,
You mentioned that I had not responded to this poem. I had read it but it disturbed me so deeply I could not respond. You write superbly well (too well maybe) and it brought it all too much to life for me. The concept of a 'succubus' entity is a frightening one.
Love Chanti (Now you know I read it. Am I a baby or what?) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/1/2005 |
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lol
i like this........I wrote a poem about an incubus sometime back.....its an interesting concept. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/10/2005 |
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Oh, my. Those succubi most run amuck in Merry Ole England. I think Ian Thorpe is also troubled by such. LOL Damn, where are all the incubi?
Loved the write, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/5/2005 |
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| Horror with a twist, Paul. Well done. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
2/4/2005 |
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| Great write, Paul! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
2/2/2005 |
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Interesting picture. Even more interesting poem. I do like the ending. Best wishes.
M.Rose |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
1/31/2005 |
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LOL
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
Oh my dark, and Gothic and sexy
oH well you get what i'm saying...enjoyed
this what a wonderful surprise!!! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/31/2005 |
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outstanding Paul
Well Penned
William ....Peace |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
1/31/2005 |
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| A fine piece.... of writing..... but I ain't going there! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/31/2005 |
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| Is Andy out to rattle my bars on your pages, or what??!! I hope he's not talking about me!! Woah, scary lady!! This is excellently penned, Paul, and is a taste of real "Goth": your diction and tone are brilliant. Even the "twist" is pure Jekyll and Hyde. I am impressed by your restraint; for the subject matter, I am sure many of us would have been tempted to "pad out" the obvious tale in this, but you have kept it delightfully "clean" (??!!) with just the telling detail that makes it muscular. Can just feel the "cold, hard kiss" with this one - metaphorically speaking! AND you manage to maintain your poetic tone! Very well done, TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/31/2005 |
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Wow....what a ending....watch out...be on alert...but then again nightmare do happen!!
Love Tinka :) |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/31/2005 |
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| Yes it well penned and like you said it had a surprise ending. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/31/2005 |
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| Oh my, this one is compelling. Well penned Paul. |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
1/31/2005 |
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Dear Paul,
Oh the "Nightmare" very vivid indeed, the picture is amazing. Excellent write, but I have come to expect this quality from you ;) I daresay, don't venture too close to where she lives lol.
warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/31/2005 |
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Yup she sure sounds like many brit gurls I've met.
Paul; the yanky ones are the best.
Just keep the accent.. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/31/2005 |
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oh my! you've been succubussed;-)
Paul, a very heady spell from hell;-)
Excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
1/31/2005 |
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| i love the way this started and ended... |
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