|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|I like this one, Mitzi. The use of dialect forces the reader to slow down and digest each word and phrase. Great work again.|
|Reviewed by Jeff Howe
|I think "Body Blues" is a quintessential piece of raw vernacular spiced with a combination of Langston Hughes, Mark Twain and Muddy Waters. Has a very, deep south t'ward Nawleans feel to it. I like it a lot. Cheers, Jeff|
|Reviewed by Helen Downey
|You have written in a language almost lost to the ears of today. Great to hear the way language was spoken from a period forever froze in time. Great read!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Ma bodies achin too, to goin dance wit you. Love it, it got rythym.
|Reviewed by Robert Fullerton (Reader)
|Great write..Great read...
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Me on the weekend baby, love to dance and have fun. but I only get out about twice a year. Shame, shame. but my minds always kicken with the funky chicken. Creative super piece. G|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
The rhythm and tempo are excellent, as-is the painting ... Bravo!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You've truly painted the Den with this marvelous write, Mitzi - and that picture is pretty cool, too.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|A cool to the life groove write, Mitzi. It made me think of something my mother used to say a lot, "Sex is the theater of the poor." Gotta release. Also makes me think of the Apostle Paul's advice to married couples to stay apart while fasting but don't fast too long because that gives room to the devil. Better hit that thang befo' somebody else hit it for ya'. LOL Loved the language/dialect. It shows that any speech strung together in the right flow is eloquent. But then we know that from past masters like Paul Dunbar. :-) Keep doing it, gurl!|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Mitzi...this piece had motion and energy...well done and I sooo loved the painting as well..
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Outstanding write Mizzlady
William ......peace & Love
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent and outstanding write!
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|This is fantastic, Mitzi.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Wild N Off The Wall Romantic Write!
|Reviewed by Lamar Hunt
|Mitzi, your "Baby" is a lucky guy. I like the honesty, the sense of rhythm, in your lines. Lamar Hunt|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Girl, this has rhythm and passion and music just pulsing in each word! Wonderful, lyrical, and o, so fiiiine :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|This is one blues tune waiting to be sung! Luckily, I've got the Mardi Gras Blues Crawl comin' up here in KC on Feb. 8th. Lots a shakin' goin' down then!|
|Reviewed by Nila Jamier
|I LOVE IT Mitzi,
The art is fantastic and the poem is moving:)
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Vivid imagery I could see them hips wiggling and them firm breasts bobbing up and down. Dam lets get down.|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Body be blue
cause de body be rockin'.
Mitzi post a poem
get everybody hoppin':-)
Loved it to pieces.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hahaha!!! Out of sight. Never mind that gin, what's the word? Thunderbird. What's the price? Thirty twice. What's the reaction? Aw, satisifaction. Sorry about that but the words just demanded to be let loose and I am here to tell you I haven't thought of that little ditty in many a year. This was a wild, get-down, get-up, get-whatever poem, Mitzi. Damn straight!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I must confess, I so look forward to your posts.
It kinda reminds me when I worked in Huntsville Alabama..
Same kina lovely expressions I fell in love with.
I had a smile whilst I read this.
You sure sound like life is fun fun fun..
u's kool babes..
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Whoa and this one really gets to shaking and is a fantastic write here. Take Felix's advice.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Fantastic stuff and ain't it the truth that every now and then we all just got to say f... it we need to unwind.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Whole lotta shakin goin on in this one Mitzi;-)!
Always a treat to read you!
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|very cool! I hear a sax and guitar blending in smokey rhythms in this...well done!|