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Volatile
by Kate Burnside
Monday, January 31, 2005
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Well, this hasn't had an airing for at least three months, and it HAS been revised ever so slightly...!!



VOLATILE


I am Incense:
My life is fragrance
and a prayer.

Put me to the flame
and my essence is released:
Loosely curling strands,
the sweetly-perfumed haze
that rises sensuous from
a newly snuffed-out wick.

I am the scent of molten wax:
Touch me now and I shall become
as that liquid second skin
that wraps you round.

Burn me, then,
and I am unleashed;
Crush me, and I am spent.

But my presence remains:
An unknown mystery
that kindles a remembrance
even after I am gone.

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Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Kate...clap clap clap...gem of a write...love n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by L. Figgins
You've captured the essence of womankind, Kate. Whether deifyed or defiled, through the ages we have carried the ember of our species. Excellent write!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
I loved this, beautiful and so well expressed, lovely!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Kate,

Sensational creation! I love the imagery and the essence that lingers on! Sensual and mysterious expression as love can be. Thanks for sharing the flames of your talent!

Cynthia
Reviewed by jude forese
totally outstanding imagery and metaphor!
Reviewed by Jane Rodway
This is one of your best, just enough said, a good balance of words and images with good clarity so that the images don't overwhelm, but help visualize. The first verse is perfect.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Kate,

Great metaphors inundate this eloquent piece ... stunning!!


Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Oh God! This is so perfect..I love it ..saved it..thankyou!!


vesna :)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Your thoughts have truly been unleashed in this poem - and they're probably uncrushable, too.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
WTG Kate, you penned after-thoughts of love very well
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Kate you are amazing. I can understand this so well. Traces of love are like those scented candles, some only give off a lot of scent when you do blow them out. This is a great write and it really makes the reader think about love and the after affects of love.

Hugs
Felix
Reviewed by George Jackson
I wasn't around three months ago, so this is the first time I've read this. Its beautiful.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Wild N Off The Wall Hot Romantic!

TRASK
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
think i remember this
sounds fresh and gives great imagery
captivating as well!!!
Reviewed by Lori Moore
A captivating piece. Well done.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Kate,

Magnificent. Haunting. But o, so beautiful! I love the way you write, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Boy this one gets your attention.
Reviewed by Janet Parker
This is spiritual, reckless abandon and mysterious. Magnificant!
Reviewed by Dave Harm
This is really good and spiritual. Even when your gone, your presence remains, I like that...
Reviewed by Nila Jamier
This is so excellent.
"Put me to the flame
and my essence is released:
Loosely curling strands,
the sweetly-perfumed haze
that rises sensuous from
a newly snuffed-out wick. "

No one could forget ya Kate!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Naa, your just a multi talented poet...

Who has only love in her heart. No guile..

Don't even think of going. The world loves yer..

But yes you do smell.....

And talk, talk talk talk.

Like my favourite flower and my favourite interestiong talk show host.

No one could get fed up with your conversation.

You also are so kind to all in your reviews.

Reviewed by M. B.
I like the way you compare yourself with intangibles: fragrance, prayer, smoky haze... essences, which as you say at the end, linger on...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
This is sensual perfection Kate. A true JOY to read.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... Guess I must be, Eileen!! Aint life grand?! :))
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Ahh an unknown mystery indeed...no mystery in your talent though Kate.

Paul;-}
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Are you really capricious Kate? Whatever you are,
I'm sure your last verse is true about you;-)!

Scintillating poem!

eileen
Reviewed by George Carroll
Love the similes, this is really well done.
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