|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Very impressive... "SOME SHOTS" strikes inner emotions and takes the reader through an impressionistic voyage on wings of imagination. A magnificent composition.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|You have the makings of a great poem here. Edit a bit as Carrie suggested. Well done style and message.|
|Reviewed by M. B.
|OMG! I am flabbergasted! I love the style of this piece, the way it sucks you in before poking your eyes out. Geez, *some shots* cleverly crafted, leaves you with your mouth hanging open. Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Final shot says it all!!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Oh boy and this one does grab you right at the end.|
|Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
|Wow. That was great. Very original and thought provoking. I think maybe it could use a little editing just to make it flow a little better...But overall, a great poetic work.|