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Naked
by Carrie A Deveney

Thursday, February 03, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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These moments
Of nothing
Comply with my reason
For living
I canít stand,
Even for a moment
This bareness
How can I say ďI feel nakedĒ
Without actually saying it?
Bend down on all fours
Pad softly with my paws
Into spaces of embarrassment
Wrap myself in big bulks of cloth
Like a cocoon
Silence
Inside a rustling of fabric
Caresses my ears
And assaults my eyes with blackness
It canít be said with obviousness
It loses something that way
Iíll rip off my skin and show it to you

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Reviewed by M. B. 2/4/2005
The fresh face of passion. There are a few lines in this piece that stand out for me such as,

"Pad softly with my paws
Into spaces of embarrassment"

and

"It loses something that way
Iíll rip off my skin and show it to you"

Intriguing piece.

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu 2/4/2005
I love this one. This a freshness in it.
Keep writing.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/3/2005
Very insightful write. I can see I'm am going to enjoy the freshness of your written work.



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