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|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poem ... (hope your decide to remain here) ...|
|Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
|Wonderful poem. We could all hope to feel this way. :)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|This is a divine poem..|
|Reviewed by M. B.
|This opening stanza grabbed me:
"Parting rings a note of agony
on my heart each moment
I've to say good-bye..."
and wouldn't let me go until I was to the end. Then I started over again, because it was such a lyrical trip.
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|If this is an indication of the quality of your work, I do hope you decide to stay. Wonderful work here.|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A wonderful celebration of the kind of love that doesn't simply fill up time but empowers lives with the substance of healing passion and the rich rewards of faith in one another.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|You write so well and I hope that you will try the bronze membership for awhile and not give up. Here is a good place to start and I have had some good luck with it. I image if the others knew that you needed some help with your membership they would be glad to help you. I first started with BidPay for the three months and then went for the year. Later I will upgrade to gold when funds become available. But do think about the bronze membership and keep posting you do have a talent.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This is total, complete, all encompassing love and acceptance
so beautifully written!