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Carrie A Deveney

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Drops
by Carrie A Deveney
Saturday, February 05, 2005
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They’re gems


All of them


The sunlight gleaming through


Their bodies


As they struggle against the wind


Forcing them upwards


They reach the top of the windshield and fly off


Each have their own journey


But all end as puddles



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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I've seen what you describe. You did this beautifully. I love the way you write, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I have never heard of raindrops looked at in such a marvellous way and I'm not sure if theintended analogy here is about humans but it sure compares well when you say "Each their own journey, but all end as puddles." I love this one Carrie, keep up the good words.

Felix
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