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The Bad Part Of Me
Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, February 05, 2005
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Abdi-noor Mohamed's poem, "Sounds of Misery," inspired this one. Thank you, dear Brother, allow me to join you, in raising a voice in defense of little girls. FGM, Female Genital Mutilation, must be stopped NOW.
"THE BAD PART OF ME"
My fear cries out as the time draws nigh.
This was promised to me from the beginning,
Ever since the moment of my birth,
Mother has told me what will happen to me.
She said that it would be over quick.
She said it will hurt but I would soon heal.
She said that it had happened to her.
And look at her--everything turned out all right.
But Mother forgets--I heard her cries
As she begged Allah to make it go away.
I saw what she endured every month
I never saw a woman have so much pain.
She said she almost died having me
And that is why I am her one and only child.
Since I am a girl, this must be done,
This cutting away of the bad part of me--
I only have one question to ask
When my blood splashes onto the thirsty Earth...
I thought I was a good little girl.
Why would she wish this on her only daughter?
(C) Copy written, 6 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Powerful Sad and very awakening poem Thank you Karla. How tragic.
You really capture things so well. This brings a big lump in the throat here as tears and anger swell.
Love Tracey xoox
|Reviewed by jude forese
|there's no bad part of a child as we all well know ... it is adult inadequacies and hostilities the child misinterprets as their own ...|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Yes, Karla it is a sad thing and must be stopped. How can parents and elders be so cruel is some thing really hard to understand.
A powerful write, need of the day.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Again, you tackle the reality of one person's barbarism against another in the most poignant and deeply penetrating way - talking of the feelings, rather than the act. I salute you, Karla. Who can know the reasoning behind this male-pleasing mutilation - but what speaks "worse" is the tolerance and acceptance of the women in such cultures that allow it. Emancipation is not only a relatively modern concept, but a relativly narrow and priviliged one. Globalisation is sadly only commercial and not social. This makes me weep - "thank you" seems not the right thing to say in such circumstances, but bless you as always for your forthright write. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very heartfelt piece Karla!!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I'm sure both Abdi-Noor and women all over the world applaud you're speaking out, too, Karla.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Oh gosh, this is horrific..|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is a heartbreaking write about something that happens unfortunately
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|While It Goes On Deaf Ears Even Those Who Say they Care____As Long As It Isn't Does Not AFFECT Them__
WRITE WRITE WRITE FOR TONIGHT YOU MAY STAND BEFORE (God)...
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I don't know why they do this and this was brought out in the program Strong Medicine. Horrible and as a woman I deplore this done to anyone.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I've read about that
in some parts of the world its done with a shape flat stone
what a nightmare
I cannot understand such a culture........so barbaric!!!
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
this is really deep
and invokes contemplation
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Thanks for joining Abdi-noor and raising your voice in a powerful, heartbreaking way! An excellent write; extremely poignant and thought-provoking. well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Does not make sense at all and should be stopped or not adhered to.|