|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|An interesting write - leaves the reader with more questions.. And room to come to their own conclusions. To me - I would read this as being someone thats suffered a long debilitating illness.. That in many ways has already been dead for a long time. Perhaps the mourning has all been done long before the person took his last breath. But then again... I've been known to be wrong. LOL
In any case - excellent write.
|Reviewed by M. B.
|The grief is in there somewhere. Truly an intriguing write that asks more question than it answers.|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Reminds me a little of the relationship between my grandfather and great-grandfather. Haven't heard from you in a while, Graham. Where you been?|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Huh, now this I can relate to, in anticipation!! Sounds mean I know, but I seek freedom from tryanny, and if thats what it takes...
Good to read you again Graham
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This soundslike a person that I know who underwent a great deal of torture from his father.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
Guess he reaped what he sowed.......
but then again, maybe he never knew......
some people go thru life that way......no consequence that touches them.....
healing for you dear poet........
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|I really do not know how to respond. This is very well written and the content excellent...yet to not weep? That I myself question, but I know not the whole story here... To me this is a really good write.