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  the Mystery of Spectrum
by jude forese
Monday, February 07, 2005
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Intelligence is a window of opportunity

Growing and developing
Moving to the momentum of its own ideals

It matures and understands
It has more to learn
Yet so much more to offer

It entertains all possibilities
While undisturbed with improbability

Dreams are the inspired thoughts
Taking on form and substance

They awaken and probe
The world within our souls
And the civilization inside our fears

Without dreams life would be barren

The sailboats adorn no sails
The rivers evaporate into dust

The mental rust:
Totally suffocating

Reality is what we make of it

It is present within our hands
It flourishes from the source of our wits

It is a gut feeling
Of a collective effort

It is the whims of a single mind

Conviction is the will
To apply ideas born by light

And to accept the mystery
Within life’s evolving spectrum
    



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Reviewed by A. Gagné (Reader) 2/10/2005
Without dreams life would be barren. Yes! :)
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/9/2005
A well thought out and intelligence piece. I especially like the concept of 'mental rust.'

Ron
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/9/2005
... this makes it good to be home!! Love the way you pan through these psychic strands and come up with the gold everytime! I certainly believe that there is some form of objective Truth which is out there, governing the universe and waiting to be found in its totality: but reality is so much a different thing - and is certainly, on a personal basis, that which we make it and feel it to be for ourselves. Like Star, I am blown away by the stanza about (dreams) awakening and probing "The world within our souls And the civilisation inside our fears"... that is soooo spot on: it IS our fears that are neatly regimented and organised such that they control the stuff of our daily life experience, and patrol with their mindset our restrictive self-imposed boundaries. Such a liberating thought that our awakened dreams can help us scale their walls and break loose through their wires! Yippee!! My sails are luffing up nicely after this... :)) TY Kate xx PS And doesn't Ellen McCarthy just ROCK!! Don't tell me she doesn't have a few more dreams and visions up her... sou'wester!!
Reviewed by M. B. 2/8/2005
The *Mystery of Spectrum* is an eye-grabbing title and a mind journey of the finest. (You do create some delicious titles for your poetry!)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/8/2005
Well I agree with this post and find it to be excellent.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/8/2005
Intelligence and intuition.

The images are mind blowing...
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 2/8/2005
there's nothing like words on the intelligence of accepting the mystery from a dreamer as real as real can get
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 2/8/2005
Hi Robert,

This was a really uncanny line --

And the civilization inside our fears

Woah, like just where did you get that from ????? Blew me out of my socks, man !!! Al
Reviewed by George Jackson 2/8/2005
Reality is an abstract state of being, since each of us have our own to face...an excellent, intelligent write...
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 2/8/2005
Robert, this is wonderful and so true. Many pleasant dreams have been the answers to age old questions, and others given the inspiration to the giants of our world.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 2/8/2005
Outstanding JudeAce
this should be sent to bi-polar support groups all over the world
lot ofpeople could benefit
very inspiring
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 2/8/2005
Eloquently stated, RJ.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/8/2005
I do have agree with Janet....you are a poet's poet...
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 2/8/2005
Ace,

As always, the entire poem
is a pleasure to read.

I especially like the
two closing stanzas.

Blessings,
Joseph
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 2/8/2005
"The sailboats adorn no sails
The rivers evaporate into dust..." These thoughts only prove how vital it is for us to express ourselves in the best forms we know how and to live life to the fullest, regardless of how others may feel. I think that is the essence of life -- the ability for us all to do what we do, however well or differently, yet always do so freely and somewhat unrehearsed.
Very well-written, thought-provoking write, Robert. Do not ever lose sight of your dreams!
Jill
Reviewed by Janet Parker 2/8/2005
If anyone knows what intelligence is, it is you! Your capacity for expressing yourself in amazing ways, is endless.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/8/2005
Yes going with the flow is important :-) I have been doing some readings for myself and basically I am to enjoy, relax, stoping thinking and let whatever happens happen :-) So you can see how this wonderful write touched me :-) Into the mystery I go smiling :-)
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson 2/8/2005
I loved the way it started..great poem.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/8/2005
And to accept the mystery
Within life’s evolving spectrum

A wonderful conclusion to a captivating piece.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 2/8/2005
Wise words penned in splendor
Reviewed by George Carroll 2/8/2005
Dreams materialize in the reality of time
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 2/8/2005
Robert,
I have no question in my mind about the unlimited spectrum of your intelligence.
Your writing seems to somehow manage to grow better every day, but everytime I read you, I think, "It just doesn't get any better than this," but then tomorrow it does..
Awesome writing Robert!

Lisa
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/8/2005
Most excellent Robert!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 2/8/2005
moving Robert, "reality is what we make of it." My reality had a helping hand until I took charge. G
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 2/7/2005
Much to chew on here, a thought provoking write.
Nice work

Peace and sunshine
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/7/2005
Love your thoughts here Jude, this was excellent!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader) 2/7/2005
You have a very nice way with words.
I hope your writings will take you far.

Jennifer
Reviewed by Dave Harm 2/7/2005
Dreams can become our reality. And our reality can evolve... Wise writing...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/7/2005
Excellent!

TRASK
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/7/2005
well done
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/7/2005
You take intelligence dreams,reality and conviction,put them through their paces and they come out into the ever evolving mystery of lifes spectrum with more clarity due to your enlightenment! Masterfully done!

etw
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 2/7/2005
Allowing our mind to be open to all possibilities affords us the ability to explore all of life's spectrum. This is a heavy, insightful and thought provoking pen, Robert. You have presented the topic with wisdom and clarity.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Lori Moore 2/7/2005
Another excellent offering.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/7/2005
Well thought out and well written capturing the spectrum of life isn't an easy thing to do but you did it I believe and quite well.

Cheers
Felix
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 2/7/2005
An excellent poem from your mighty pen, Jude ...

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