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Lets Break It Down - One On One
by Erica Ivory
Monday, February 07, 2005
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Lets break it down.. One on one... What you have.. You thought you won.. Now you see hell has just begun.. You had to have what was not yours to take.. Now you are sorry.. Want to walk away from this grave mistake.. Put your hands where they just didn't belong.. Now pay the consequences.. This consequence is life long.. Live in your tiny cell.. Think about the life You took.. Was it worth it? Maybe not.. But then to you maybe so.. See if you feel the same as you grow old.. Watching life pass you by as you rot in jail day after day And you think you are the only one to pay.. What about her family.. Your family.. Lives changed in one single day.. Changed forever.. Grief so strong you can smell it.. Taste it.. Children's hands filthy.. Digging Pleading.. Screaming For their mother.. The one YOU took away.. Lets break it down.. One on One.. You have a coldness in your eyes.. You are man without a soul.. Don't know how you got that way.. Don't care to know.. Evil.. Malicious.. The devils son.. Live in your pathetic mind.. While we live outside in the pain you created... You are the master artist.. Your canvas colored crimsom red... Watch the little girl cry.. As you watched her beg.. You held her in the palm of your hand.. Yaa.. Lets break it down.. One on one.. They say our life has just started.. I think our hell has just begun.. If you break it down one on one.
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
2/8/2005 |
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Hi Erica, You sure do the stuff justice. Tell it as it should be said, with no holds barred. That is Erica, eh?
Nice reading you after such a long time, girl!!!
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/8/2005 |
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| extrememly powerful ... cuts right to the core ... |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
2/8/2005 |
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Very well written Erica.
Paul;-} |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/8/2005 |
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Par excellence Ertica!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/7/2005 |
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Oh this was so good, very well written, excellent!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Fritz Barnes |
2/7/2005 |
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| Erica, you have "broken it down" very well. Keep writing! |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
2/7/2005 |
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| Wow... don't know what else to say. If the criminal has any soul at all, still living in this world, would be a hell worst then death... |
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