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  2.  Metaphors
  3.  Verisimilitude

by Mark C. Carroll

Monday, February 07, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If you can figure out where this came from, I am sure you should be a poetry critic. Only I could write crap like this and not remember doing it. At least I learned a new word.

What bellwether swipes the season?



Stealing saleable seconds

Steady in pace

And song incessant

Yelling, disturbing, and nothing else.

Sonic beats and rhythms

Assaulting peace

Grainy energetic clones

Dance most tirelessly


Stealing my time

Who leads the thief?

In my direction

Yielding this confusion.

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Reviewed by Walter Smith III (Reader) 2/18/2005
good poem. seems the confusion makes you think more about it to try and figure it out. keeps the poem on the mind. sure is a long way from mud and barefeet.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 2/11/2005
crap, i think not
enjoyed the flow and confusion
is one of the best feelings to write
or write about
we all been there!!!
enjoy this, truly
Reviewed by Mary Quire 2/9/2005
I agree with Robert. Confusion can yield good poetry. Glad I stopped by.

Reviewed by jude forese 2/8/2005
sometimes confusions yields good poetry ...
Reviewed by Sue Hess 2/8/2005
i like it too
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/7/2005
Well, I don't know where it came from, but I know I like it! This was very interesting and very intriguing,


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