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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
2/22/2009 |
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Closure stimulates growth...
Revealing emotions voluntarily transmutes into the convert...from one thing to another back into One Whole:) one religion to another religion, a preference to another preference which equals spirits freed cavort...
Sage |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/24/2005 |
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| i like this |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/9/2005 |
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Carole,
Ain't THIS an exciting, lilting write! YES!!!!!! Well done!
Energetic, free spirited--love it
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/8/2005 |
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| Ah the awakening of spring and this is a lovely ku. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/8/2005 |
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This is lovely, carolyn! I want to cavort!;-)
housebound is not my cup of tea;-)
etw |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/8/2005 |
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| Perfect. |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
2/8/2005 |
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The fragrance of your poetry is so Beautiful and verdant, Carolyn.
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/8/2005 |
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Excellent...I wrote a poem once with the title "Fliting Sun" here it is
Flirting Sun
As this day fades away
In the dusk of gold
Red sun flirting playfully
With shadows upon horizon blue
Mountain goes to sleep at night
As star lights creep closer
Embrace the evening sky
In purple shades of hue
Dream in darkness fades away
As time of sorrow falls away
Upon the final flames of day
That feeds upon the heart
Dark sky… wind the only song
But yet a good old friend
As dreams of darkness pass away
The glorious light of night will stay
As stars above
Now gently
Shine
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/8/2005 |
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| You do these so well, Carolyn. I love haiku and this one is another of your gems. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/8/2005 |
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| the magic sun spirts shine in this ku! |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/8/2005 |
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| !!!!! I like. |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
2/8/2005 |
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| Your Haiku is exquisite, Carolyn! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/8/2005 |
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| excellent..... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/8/2005 |
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| Could sure use some of that euphoria right now! |
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