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The Joining
by Mitzi Kay Jackson
Tuesday, February 08, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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after the exchanging of vows
after the exchanging of rings
after the jumping of brooms
after the family drinks from the cup
after the dance..and the night moves in
baby meet me on the moon~~~~

I wake to the scents of wisteria
In the spring
Sheets stained with
The pleasure and pain
Of me blooming
Under wisteria
in the spring
“this was meant to be”
he whispers to me
and his breath is hot like the sun
you play so well with my inner
fingers have erupted
such a war inside of me
like no other
and you play such a glorious
tune with my skin
she yells out like Jennifer Holiday
…. “I’m not going”
my leggs open
all of springtime blooming
and I am ripe
you pick me
till my soul scream
cause I bleed from
the opening of seeds
and you kiss me
…….you kisses me
…..and you kiss me
Shallows I become
like wind in a storm
shelter within mother willow
I never knew black could be soooo good
Even though the night has come along
Showing my full potentials
As queen of that throne
Virgin to the notion
That I had any power
I watch you collapse inside of me
I’ve never felt such
No longer myself
Follower to you
I am leader as you crash
Like mountain to sea
All of you
In all of me
Rain down on me
I’m nocturnal so I
Every ripple of your chest
Every inch of your length
Wide like morning time
Fresh with
Rings clash above my head
Pains’ fading now it’s getting good
All the laughter
Of promises
And well
Could not have
Prepared me for
This special event
With The Sun
My thighs


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Reviewed by Edwin Larson 2/11/2005
Hot spiced write...Excellent!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 2/11/2005
Oh my oh my oh my....I am
j e a l o u s...
you really can write passion beautifully.

Gorgeous work!
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 2/10/2005
Mitzi! Mitzi! Mitzi! Dang, girl, you're good! You write of lust and passion, love and pain, like no one else! Such an awesome and powerful style. Bravo!
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 2/9/2005
Absolutely stunning the way you have pulled this all together - leaving your readers hanging on your every word. Breathless.

Loved this.. I've missed reading your poems hun. It's so good to be back home again.

Reviewed by M. B. 2/9/2005
Stunning, breathtaking, (at least I am left breathless). "The Joining" is a sexy hawt union from begining to end... oh wait... there's really no end in site for these two! LOL
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/9/2005
Never liked the wisteria round here cuz it is so peeked. You have showed me beauty I didn't know it had.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 2/9/2005
wow, super love expression my friend. wow! G
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/9/2005
Goodness me!! Makes me long for that "first time " all over again - but to be honest, don't think it could ever compete with this one!! And to think that, for the most part, it only ever keeps on getting better and better!! This is a beautiful capture of one of life's most pleasurable and memorable moments - and you have made it unforgettable for us all over again! Totally transporting, Mitzi, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 2/9/2005

Beautiful picture ... 'steamy' poetic write - exceptional!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by Denise Edwards 2/9/2005
Arousing and sensual! Full of tantilizing details from start to finish! A very hot, erotic awakening!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/9/2005
Hot ,hotter, VERY HOT!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 2/8/2005
Hotly romantic, this rocks.

Joy and sunshine
Reviewed by jude forese 2/8/2005
totally mesmerizing!
Reviewed by Zoe Chow 2/8/2005
My my have some intense way of writing, and I love it. Keep it coming!! (no pun intended hee hee)
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 2/8/2005
Now this I love. Great pen
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/8/2005
A very erotic write this one is and wonderfully done.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/8/2005
Mitzi I know it sounds trite, but it's true
"Nobody does it better!" I know the feeling,
but I can't write it like you;-)...etw
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/8/2005
wow what a wonderful romantic write. Well done Mitzi
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/8/2005
The first blooming is a rare and precious rite of passage and I can only hope that every woman on the face of the earth had such an awakening. You damn near outdid yourself here.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/8/2005
Hot Wild Romantic Write Like Life!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/8/2005
So that's why we never see the sun?

Wonderful poem, kinda steamy...
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/8/2005
a beautiful, sensual write...a wonderful write!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/8/2005

WOW--what a passionate, beautiful write! More, more, more!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :-)

"...I didn't know black could be sooooo good..."

When you write about it, Mitzi, it's gooooood!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/8/2005
Quite a Poetic Springtime!
Reviewed by Aberjhani 2/8/2005
Incandescent spirit, honored flesh, and floral emotion interweave in these lines to make a holy braid of joyful loving unity. The way Valentines is s'posed to be:-)
Reviewed by Fritz Barnes 2/8/2005
I very much enjoyed this!

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