|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|You know how many times I've told my heart to give up?
It only listens to you.
Thanks all you angels!
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|Well, John, this is so beautifully written and flows wonderfully. Well, you knew you'd get a reaction, didn't you!?!
Of course, I'm with Tinka on this one! Don't give in to the cynics! Keep planting those memories in your poetry and we'll all enjoy the fruit of your labour!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey hellooooooo any body home!!!!
Romantics never gives up....Oh okay maybe for a day or ten but never forever OKAYYYYYYYYYYY!!
|Reviewed by M. B.
|Don't stop dreaming... the price is too great in the end. I just revised a poem (The Executioner) on this very topic recently. "Giving Up" speaks of much heartache and loss and I reiterate Dave, you gotta lose it to find it. When you're at the bottom, there's only one way out: Up. Hang in there! Keep writing. It will help to exorcize your personal demons. I wish you the best. :)|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|The Bible says, you need to lose it to find it... 12-step groups say the same thing. So don't give up, your close to finding it all...|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well John sometimes it is very difficult to face things but giving up is not an option. I agree with Karen and Sue and take it from me as I have survived much. Do not give up and God knows your address. I could not have survived all the surgery that I have had and three bouts of cancer by giving up. Unless you let go and let God.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|don't ever give up; that'd be the worst thing you could possibly do! you are in my prayers, john!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., kaern lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|you are too good to ever give it up|
|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Did you write this for me? Powerful write and describes exactly what I've been through the past 3 months with my writing. Keep donig the wonderful work. This one really touched home. Feels good to be back in the light of day again!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
A poignant write--don't ever give up. I love the way you write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(