|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Grand metaphors serve as a beacon in this exceptional poetic write ... I agree with your philosophy ...
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|lots of us here can relate
for surely i can it is hurtful to others when they see
you (with me)not only can't remember their name but them as well
you can see it in their eyes and i feel so ashamed...i have to try and explain to them....most understand but it is really a bad feeling left with me and them
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Oh I know this feeling well.. I call it a Foggy Brain.. LOL And Lord knows it takes over more often than not in my poor head. Wonderful write.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i have those every day, it seems. about the truth, ain't it?? well done, karen!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Beth Elaine
|Hahaha! That's just the truth of it. Now, where did I put my gingko biloba?|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|A daily occurance.
I'm with you on the final stanza..If I can remember what it was?
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice write. I love the ending.|
|Reviewed by M. B.
|Definitely thought provoking behind the humor. Clever word play.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sobering thoughts. Nicely done, Karen. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well there are many things a person can do to keep themselves from becoming senile and work their brain. Sometimes though having an old head around is really good for everyone.|