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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/25/2005 |
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| In French, there is a saying that goes like this: Revenge is a dish that is eaten cold. I thought it appropriate here, William. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
2/11/2005 |
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william,
the forbidden fruit?
excellence!
thanks,
d. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/11/2005 |
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Wow.....Most excellent but sad write William!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/11/2005 |
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wow, William....now that would be one powerful kiss....another excellent write my friend...
Peace and love, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/11/2005 |
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Oh so powerful and excellent, very dark,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/11/2005 |
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| Silent but Deadly - and a most powerful piece, William. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/11/2005 |
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| William....gem of a write...loved the way you started this write and the ending was superb too....clap clap clap...love n luck....BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
2/10/2005 |
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| wow...this is excellent! The flow and repetition of that one one has the effect of a triphammer. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/10/2005 |
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| Don't wet your own lips with your tongue or the cyanide with be the last thing you taste...ed |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/10/2005 |
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Sad, very sad, and there are so many women to love and hate out here?
Enjoy your writings William... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/10/2005 |
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| now this is the kiss of death! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/10/2005 |
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Talk about a knockout kiss... |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
2/10/2005 |
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Wow William..this packs a powerful punch!
EXCELLENT !!
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
2/10/2005 |
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| Talk about sweet revenge. You have capture what many have thought right after being dumped. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/10/2005 |
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| This is a very compelling write and Larry is right. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
2/10/2005 |
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| Sort of takes grieving to a whole 'nother level, doesn't it? |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/10/2005 |
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Oh my William! That is some incredible poem!
You have me licking my lips and cringing;-)
Well done!...
etw |
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