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Tomb Rolled
by Walter LaVerne Jones
Friday, February 11, 2005
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Mellow mellow why is it gone shells of faith in a song lift the pocket for free pass the plate for me 10 percent tip of the day 20 a tithe going away Cesar holds the coin bet is a soul going home
mellow Mellow that is the cry child of the faith now dies rock carved clean body gone she was his gift in the song Easter morning Gardener late Soul and vision not mixed fate rock of man rolls down hill somebody is here for the kill
Mellow Mellow I ask why thunder and fighting light midnight sky stars blend with the dream from a tree seldom is the world of man seen true love tied to a stake faith and hope never too late
mellow Mellow religious drug of need Adam the victim eve the seed Able the answer Cain the solve How did evil evolve mark of the time lost child f hell where the cost snake in chain myth or truth where is life where is youth
Mellow mellow I am alone book in pocket mind a home silver words left on a stage past dreams now the rage corner to corner how do I fare love is the message there faith the hope is seen Child of Joe fulfills the dream
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/14/2005 |
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plenty of roads displayed here
the fourth verse beats them all to me
enjoyed overall but that one struck a cord |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/12/2005 |
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| nice flow and imagery ... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/12/2005 |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/11/2005 |
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Good one. Well-done!
Sandie Nay Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/11/2005 |
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| Another beautiful write Walter. |
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