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Killing Herself With Her Mind
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Saturday, February 12, 2005
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She always knew she was lucky to be
Loved. Ungloved, though, her mind hated herself,
Berated, castigated; honoree
Of nothing but egotism, of self.

She tried to free being when young, unhung
Aspirations of becoming someone
In the struggle. Feloned life. She restrung
Adversity, like pearls shot from a gun,

Bulleted into someone else’s house,
Someone else’s life. Cruel dreams, unfulfilled,
Create themes of self-destruction… Hush, mouse,
It takes eternity to become – skilled.

Days fade into nights; she becomes sorrow.
Built to absorb sin, she weeps tomorrows.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 2/12/05

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Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/12/2005
This is a very moving poem.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/12/2005
Erin,

Your words always make the reader pause with their vision and power. Spectacularly imaged, the reader always senses the mood in your compelling writes--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Sandy Knauer 2/12/2005
Erin, you have such remarkably deep thoughts and express them so well. I'm amazed by your work. I love this line - She restrung
Adversity, like pearls shot from a gun. Thanks, it is always an honor to read your work.
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 2/12/2005
A brilliant, brooding piece of work, Erin. Love it! The brain-mind-ego connection to three dimensional reality is a labryinth only the fearless dare to navigate... "Built to absorb sin"... fascinating how the dark side is so very alluring...
Well done, Poetess.
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