by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, February 12, 2005
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On Discovery Health Network, they had a program about an extraordinary little girl, Zubaida, from Afghanistan; she was burned in an accident involving an oil lamp. Doctors told her family to take her home to die; nothing could be done. Medical doctors in the United States heard about her condition and flew her here; over the course of a year, this young girl endured 13 painful surgeries and much physical therapy to release the scar tissue restricting movement in her face, neck and arms. She returned to Afghanistan afterwards, scarred but beautiful compared to what she had looked like after the accident.
This poem came to mind while watching the program.
flame kissed face
forced to look
shame kissed face
what once was
has been seared
"take her home
we can't do
LET HER DIE"
pain kissed face
should not have
to live like
fame kissed face
from the land
hope for her
she is home
(C) Copy written, 12 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Wonderful tribute, Karla...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wonderful tribute Karla!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|No child should feel any pain, no injuries, no sickness...that is the way I see that the world should be...but what do I know...? Ed|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is a wonderful tribute Karla
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Wonderful tribute to her, Karla. I'm so glad for her that she was able to get help. I didn't see the program. Thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|I saw that program, Karla, and this is a wonderful poem.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Karla -This child's mind and life have been saved. That is equaled by your preserving such perseverence in poetry. A masterful piece of work. It is a privilege to read it. - Bill|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|She looks happy, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Such a brave young girl; can't even imagine the terrible terrible pain she must have endured, and her recovery is, indeed, a remarkable story.|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Karla Brava! Your compassion and beauty of heart shines in
this superb poem. I didn't see it but heard about her. You
did her proud, so did this country!Thanks for sharing!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Zubaida IS a Miracle Survivor; my, what a inspiring story people can learn from! Awesome write about a lovely child; I wish nothing but the best for young Zubaida! Thank you for sharing her story with us here! Beautiful job; brava!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Awesome write! A wonderful, inspiring story.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Larson
|Saw the program...heart-wrenching to say the least...A wonderful tribute with an intersting format. Thanks for sharing.