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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
2/14/2005 |
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| powerful imagery with wonderful flow. Good Job. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/14/2005 |
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you always have a wonderful flow
enjoyed this much
gives off gentle releasing~~~like sighs |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/13/2005 |
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Very well written Ronald...I like the motion of the ocean!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/12/2005 |
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| "Emotion is cranial grease" -great line ... fantstic poem! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/12/2005 |
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This is very well written, Ron. Emotions penned on the page often spill over to the reader...it is one of the great things about poetry.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/12/2005 |
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superb poem Ron! Excellent analogies, beautiful rhyme and rhythm !
etw |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/12/2005 |
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| I liked this post and when one reads too much in something it becomes a problem. To wit each is entitled to their opinions. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/12/2005 |
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| Wisdom in motion, bro... ...thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
2/12/2005 |
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| Energy in motion... good write |
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