|Reviewed by Nila Jamier
|This is so beautiful and longing in its expressions to allow yourself to be known:)
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Instantly the visions stunned me so
Voracious appetites began to grow
Over me as I would look at them
Reaching in my heart to find some gem
Yearning for a way to let her know.
I have no doubt that she knows now.. Perhaps she feels the exact same way.. Isn't it wonderful how words and an image can open doors that were always there but unseen.
Your writing is beautiful .. I hope she is worthy of your dedication.
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..OK kiddo..out with it..it's the only way..c'on..TELL HER!!!..geeeeezzz
You're an Angel so whoever this other ONE is she'll recognize ya OK?
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I would say just tell her and see what comes out!!
Who ever that might be would not know otherwise Methinks...lol!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i'm sure she'll sparkle with this lovely poem ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful poem John! Mysterious too! I hope you can
let her know. If shes as good hearted as you, it shouldn't
take a gem to tell her;-)
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Sometimes it is not easy to put into words the feelings that are in our heart. I think you did admirably with this one, John.
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well I would say that you just did John and did so very well.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I agree with you, John. I know that of which you write. Thank you so much for pointing it out. Love and peace. Regis|