|Reviewed by Natasha Bowman
|There are chances for choices, there are choices by chance.
This is the sort of introspective honesty that makes me wonder if self discovery is actually a product of someone else's art.
Know what I'm sayin'?
|Reviewed by Ryan Figura (Reader)
|this reminds me of a person. sitting in a room trying to figure out what to do with her life. as if no one is helping her and all she wants is a little direction.
i have a picture idea to go with this poem.
now all i need is a model.
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|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
The first line, - a true definition on the so called "FREEDOM", -
and the eighth line completes it by depicting willingness as "CHANCE".
I enjoyed this composition named, "12:11". It is a rainbow becoming dews of wisdom.
I salute the Author of "12:11".
Healthy blissful life through a productive living, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU